All Comments on 'A Serendipitous Reunion'

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Bystander125Bystander125almost 2 years ago

For a very short story, you have excellent character development. Makes me wanting to see more connection between these two. I hope that this is not a “one off”, but I also don’t see this as a looong series.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Would love a second chapter

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Reunion - unless the spelling was deliberately incorrect for a reason I missed.

Member389Member389almost 2 years agoAuthor

Anonymous27 minutes ago

Reunion - unless the spelling was deliberately incorrect for a reason I missed.

Nope that was a genuine "I've been awake for 27 hours" bonehead move. I'll be resubmitting this story to fix that now. =D

Ken_Richards57Ken_Richards57almost 2 years ago

I was excited when I saw you are writing again! But, when I read the title – a second time - I cringed. I thought, this is not a good start. I am pretty sure I have read all your works and I enjoyed all of them. After your extended furlough I started to think someone else is writing in your stead. After reading this quickie I was glad to see you are back! One question: Who is this Ren you are going to union with? :D Welcome Back!!!

Member389Member389almost 2 years agoAuthor

Yes it is me. The title was corrected, an unfortunate typo. Nobody likes a smartass Ken_Richards57 LOL

I'm glad you enjoyed it! =)

UncertainTUncertainTalmost 2 years ago

So, I hadn't expected to enjoy this but I definitely did. 5*

Cal59Cal59almost 2 years ago

Welcome back, really enjoyed this, thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Truly enjoyed this story.

So happy to see you back. I look forward to seeing you finish up the open ended stories like Paige.

Welcome back!

pcman1950pcman1950about 1 year ago

Reread this in advance of diving into chapter 2. Still a 5 but I've added a fave.

Boyd PercyBoyd Percyabout 1 year ago

Fancy meeting her!

5

cmj711cmj711about 1 year ago

What a lovely romantic fantasy come true.

I loved it.

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