All Comments on 'A Serendipitous Weekend'

Two many mistakes to really enjoy the story so I could not rate it very high because of that reason.!!!! ( did you go back & read this when you were through.?? ) You sure need to.!!*****

That so many critics have never posted here.

Seriously, you need an editor. Your stories will read much better.

Don't know what you guys are talking about, there are a few mistakes, yes. But all in all a rather enjoyable story.

You doing good Cafune

A well-written if too short a story, with a good plot, character development, but better placed in the Romance category.