All Comments on 'A Serpent in Paradise Ch. 01'

The "getting harem NTR'd" is a fetish that seems pretty non-existent for people so I'm glad you're writing this. Hats off to you good sir

You bounced around and tried to cram too into a short story while you failed to fully develop or even lay the foundation for any of it.

Ok, I think I shouldn't have said that you didn't need to read my other stories first, so apologies for that. This is not the best place to start with my 'Haller universe' stories, as it is the culmination of them. There is in fact a ton of development and foundation for all the characters, which is to be found in my other stories.

I always enjoy your stories. 5*.

Thanks, VP - I have started reading your mind-control series.

Netorare is a cuck thing