by danishmichaela
For a first submission this was just superb. Very well written and highly charged with eroticism. Looking forward to a lot more of the same from this author.
This is a incredible sexy story! turned me on to no end.
Great work! hope you enjoyed writing it!
love,
Thom
What is married life going to bring? They going to go back to the club as a married couple Jas getting a 3some?/ Please write more Thanks
Sammie 50+ USA
Such a great little fantasy - free, unabashed, guilt free sex - and then you have to throw in the "will you marry me?" return to monogamous, boring, guilt ridden, life. Couldn't you have at least hooked them up with Jas and made it a threesome?
Oh, sorry - this is your fantasy, not mine!
So yeah, other than that - I loved it. Cute little story, great little fantasy!