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All Comments on 'A Sexy Roller Coaster Ride'

by dutchpantyraider

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

I hope you will write part 2 to this great story & keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Bad.

Suspension of disbelief, it can help you write better stories. It's not the idea in it self what's wrong, but the way you present it and the fact that it evokes no emotion.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Nice concept

I liked the idea of the story. However it seemed rushed. It was difficult to visualize the encounters and the cages.

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