All Comments on '"A Shemale Submission": A Lust Story'

Enjoyed it - many opportunities for pleasant jo's! Now of course must read all the stories referenced herein. :)

Congratulations to hfernandez1983 for spectacular artwork, especially the scenes in Annabelle's townhouse. More erotic than photographs.

I keep having to read this one over and over. I think it is one of your best.

I would like to offer a couple of suggestions if that is okay.

I know you don't care for sequels, BUT I would really love to see a sequel (or a continuation of the story) after Jasmine and Tori move in with Annabelle. Under Annabelle's guidance Tori could have Jasmine whenever and however the mood struck her. Of course Robyn Thomas would be a great target.

But no matter what, I would really like to see this story AND "A She-male School: A Teacher Seduced". I love these 2 storylines.

Slave Ed

Once again, an excellent work. Made me want to play as well

Of course I loved this story.

And your illustrator! This is my first reading of a shemale story it had me wanting to suck Annabelle's cock. Normally thinking about sucking a cock turns my stomach. What have you done to me?

I really loved this story. It contained my biggest fantasies all in one. I'm a male, but a lesbian is inside me trying to get out. Lesbians and shemales are my oldest fantasies. I love the fact that you combined them in this story. Once I started reading I couldn't stop. It was delicious and I was dripping. You mixed in a little interracial sex, which i love too. Beautiful job, love your writing, love your kinky mind! Thank You!!!

Thanks for giving me a very wet tummy!

85 stars!

More? Please???!!!

Excellent use of wonderful illustrations! Still hard for a second and third time!

XOXO

KristyT

So hot. I kept jerking off

You have out done yourself,I would love to see more of Jasmine,

I wanted it to go on and on and on and on!

It was really pleasurable to read a story of this length, with the quality of writing maintained throughout, as well as being highly erotic it was also wonderfully readable. A stunning example of erotic literature, and the excellent illustrations added to the pleasure, rather like having a superb dessert after a brilliant main course.

Thank you

Despite the length,the intensity never lagged!

What a telling piece of literature in that you reveal even more of your juicy imagination. You get 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Love this story. Love the suspense you put in as she is made to wait. Very inspiring ;-) while reading it. Hope you keep writing..

I came about 38 times durring this book all in one go from 2 pm to 3 am I honestly was and still am so horny I wont be able to sleep. Thanks for sharing this story it was amazingly well written and so unbelievably hot!!

Great work I wanted to cum reading every page, and I was looking forward to seeing Jasmine and daughter fucking. The 3some scene with the blond is sublime....

Well written and beautifully illustrated.

The whole piece flowed from start to finish and kept me hard throughout.

Thank you for producing this great piece of work xx

It just seemed poorly constructed from a story point of view and the illustrations seemed oddly paired with the story at times. Not good.

Silkstockinglover,

For many years I have wondered why both men and women (many men, some women?) enjoy their own or others' fantasies about "shemales." Do you have any thoughts on this? What do shemales represent to our imaginations that makes them, to some people, desirable objects or desirable creations of fantasy? I would love to know your opinions on this since you have spent so much time writing a story and including illustrations about it.

I must have masturbated to this for the last month 😍

This one deserves awards above and beyond anything I've noticed on this site. Aside from being a marathon event, I can only imagine the artist commissioned to create the images - which perfectly matched the text. The "cartoons totally give remarkable substance" to the otherwise ridiculous "gross Exaggerations". Your creation is a model for other authors who want (NO, Need) to study and understand how with big dicks and watermelon tits ... may be a dream or wish list, but one that emphasizes how the distraction from reality can eventually spoil the readers interest. That said, I still read the entire script - it DID get my attention.

Didn't like the back and forth between reality and fantasy as something was lost along with the subject. Your stories are very good, but this isn't one of them.

Kudos to your artist. That took a lot of work. I'm still trying to perfect the stockings, but I think I'm getting there. Also, I've been working toward a higher level of realism/detail, so I'm not sure I could ever pull off such a venture and keep my day job. I think I've nailed the stockings problem in my next illustration set titled "Next Character". Let me know what you think when Literotica releases/approves it.

Seriously, you are the best writer here!!

Great stories which make my cock hard for the longest time (I like to keep it un til the end), great writing which makes it so much more fun to read and such excellent topics and hot scenes!!!

Please write more, for this one, the one from the 1950's and... Well. just keep going!!

Loved this - best story yet. Only wish it had contained the gangbang by the football team mentioned!

My God, I have read published fiction that was not as well written as this story.54A

Great story I usually don't read the ones this long, they don't keep my interest, I read this one all the way through. This one hit many of my favorite categories, shemale, lesbian and incest.

Thanks for sharing you stories

makes me wish i was annabelle!!!!! loved the fantasy of it

parent-teacher conferences could take on a whole new meaning if the student is bad could also punish the parents-student in kinky ways but with the reverse being true good behavior could also be rewarded in there own special ways

love to go on a field trip with these teachers

how many boys is annabelle and ms.rose going to turn into shemales ??? for good or bad behavior

more please

Thank you for a wonderful well written fantasy - Loved every word of it!

Loved the story! It;s my fantasy also, shemales, being used like a good little slut.

Thank you

I have been reading as many of your stories for years. I always look for the new ones. They always get me very hot. This is one of your best. Keep writing please. I look forward to the next chapter. Thank you Bonnycd

I've been a fan of yours for years. Ever since I turned 18 and found this site as a way to watch less porn but stimulate my sexuality. You are an amazing writer and have influenced my sex life drastically. I'm now 23 and have fulfilled many of my own fantasies thanks to you. Love this story. Such an amazing window into who you are. Thank you for sharing.

T.M.C.Q.

Not normally my cuppa but I took a chance because of how much I have enjoyed some of your other stories. Very glad I did too!

I think you did an excellent job of weaving many of your previous stories into this one in a believable way. Just enough doubt and concern, enough hesitation and build up to raise the tension in a realistic manner.

Best wishes on your continued success as a writer. May all of your fantasies come true!

This is one of your best ever. I am a totally devoted fan of yours. I only wish that Lit would send notices to their followers when they publish a new story, like another site I'm on. Regardless, I'm always thrilled when I check and find that you've been a busy girl. Such a good girl.

I anxiously await a sequel, or more. Thank you.

I want to be you. Love everything, so many new stories to spin-off

You'd do alright if your stories didn't contain so much lesbian and 'dick-girl' bullshit.

An excellent story. One question though. You give so much of your personal life in it. It just makes me (and others too I am sure) wonder-how accurate is it? I mean, you really put yourself "out there" in the non bold portions.

Perhaps it is none of anyone's business. If so, no problem.

Great story loved ever verse. How about writing one where you get fucked by a man. Every position and finally you both cum together. Fuck you make me hot and wet.

Julia

Will you marry me! I love your mind and imagination! I wish everyone was as enlightened as you! Your descriptions are so sensual that I feel you are in my head and reading my thoughts!

People know your work.You don't have to list all your stories in this story. I felt like there were 2 or 3 commercials in the story. Other that that, I loved the story.

I just have to tell you how erotic and how horny your gorgeous stories are, as a sexy T girl myself they are just amazing

Thank you

X Jenny X

This is the hottest and wildest story ever among your Silkstockingslover stories.

I just love it, couldn't go to the next page without masturbating twice or more.

Hats off to you, you are my favorite author.

Please continue writing , don't stop ,

Heartfelt I love your work and your team's

I've responded on your past stories and again, as a 48 yr old mom of 3 adult kids ( 2 daughters and a son ) , I love your stories. Only knowing you from your stories is enough to say that you have a beautiful mind !! Never stop writing please.

I love reading all your stories please keep them cuming

... of she-male/trans/futa stuff ....

having said that, I voted a 5* for the illustrated story of yours. For no other reason[s] than: -- the story's hot; the illustrations are hot [if I ignore the shemale/futa]; if I could imagine your story's world, I would've spermed on the first page; and... I think good work would be rewarded.

So there.

Looking forward to more stuff from you [BTW -- I REALLY get into maledom/femsub BDSM ---- (hint-hint)]

As the Trekkies say: "live long and prosper"

Jasmine, you have outdone yourself again, I thought this was well written and yes I did think a couple of illustrations could have been better, I thought they were also very nice.

I thought it was hot. And although some seemed kind of repetitive thats what a fantasy is, just a reoccuring desire. I enjoy the pics scattered throughout they add to the imagery and i like longer storys. Not excessively long but when the writer adds a little here and there it helps build a story. Hope to see a sequel, maybe with illustrations as well?

123, 321, 132 (holes) over and over and over again

Seems like an artistic rejuvenation took place here. Great to read. Awesome stuff!

I also had problem with not seeing images. Allowing literotica.com JavaScript was able to view images. Then toggling the JavaScript, images they weren't displayed.

BJ

Sorry Silky!! but the toons suck they are way to stiff/ridged these computer drawings dont have any human traits check out m.manara or hugdebert drawings they have life in them you would be better off without toons and just your written stories

I think this is probably your best story. While it's written from your point of view and about your fantasies, it also appeals to us males, many of whom probably would never admit it, but the appeal of an encounter with a she-male is very high on my list of fantasies and I'd jump at the chance.

Some might think it makes them less masculine but does it make a female less feminine when she has anal intercourse? Or sucks a cock? Absolutely not, so why would it make a male less masculine?

Please keep writing the stories of your fantasies, whatever they are, or may become in the future.

As for the images showing, I suspect that the more images there are in a story, and the more stories written that include images, it takes more resources to download them and lits servers may have to be upgraded or the pipelines to the servers may have to be upgraded. Hopefully they'll figure it out and do what it takes.

Wish I could have given this story more than 5 stars.......

Another very hot story by my favorite author. I've read all of your stories at least once. Can;t wait for more. Bless you.

If only she had fantasized about her daughter having a cock. I know she already knew she does not, but there is just so little shemale/futa-on-mom stories. Do you think you could ever write a story of a mom and her shemale daughter?

Once you get the pictures - Wow!

Once you read the story - Wow!

Both together? Yowsers in my trousers!

Thank you!

Ca not see any pics:(

Hi all,

I have sent a message to lit about the picture problem.

That said, if you refresh the page 1-5 times the pictures seem to show up... I know not perfect but definitely worth it I believe as the pictures are a delight (I hope).

Jasmine

Jasmine, very few pictures loaded when read on an Android phone. Those I saw were wonderful.

Hi

I have sent in a help desk for the pictures... This hasn't ever happened before....

Hopefully, it is resolved soon.... The pictures I think really enhance this tale.

Jasmine

Thanks for pouring yourself into your work! I appreciate your intense blend of fantasy, reality and autobiography.

I hope that the lack of pictures is resolved soon, I can't wait to see the entire work.

Best regards!

Woke early and, as always, checked site for new stories. Pleased to see you had posted another. Pictures do not download for viewing. Just skimmed story. Does it need to be broken down into 2 chapters? Hope you and Literotica can solve this issue.

aren't resolving.

I'm a big fan of yours and routinely look for your latest submission. In fact your illustrated stories encouraged me to give them a try. I hear you about the graphics!

I'm using Daz Studio. The text part is easy. I publish a story roughly monthly. With the two illustrated stories I am working on, it is taking a month to six weeks for for the graphics alone. And I am far from done!

Keep up the good work!

Schaka