All Comments on '"A Shemale Submission": A Lust Story'

I love reading about beautiful strong transgender women seducing both women and men. Very nice work!

Well done. Amazing effort to pull all together. Very hot, very erotic!!!

jack_ittard: Your objection to the author's shameless self promotion is exactly the reason it deserves at least 20 *! If you've never read some of Jasmine's fantastic stories, you should. This ranks among her best. Amazing illustrations along with the outstanding story deserves every accolade it's received.

I just reread this story and rediscovered how beautifully erotic and wonderfully seductive you have written this story. It is written in such believable language, you can feel Jasmine's desires mixed with her societal built in hangups with open minded relationships. Also. Compounded when she openly admits her incestuous attraction to her beautiful daughter. This has added taboo, yet the unsaid attraction some have for this kind of beautiful relationship. If it's something both desire as well, which is the case in this well written and thought out story. A very beautiful account of a woman who needs to admit and discover herself.

Such a Great and Hot read. Your stories are such a turn on. Well done and keep up the good work.

Skipped most of the fantasizing, just way too much. Also, way too much referencing of other stories the author has created, felt like I was watching a self promoting author on an interview show book tour and after all of that, not even a great incest pay off. Halve the length (get rid of most of the fantasizing and shameless self promotion) and give the incest it's proper conclusion and you got a 5 star story. Illustrations are pretty descent towards the end....3 stars!

I haven't read whole story but pics near end WOW (if, only taking cock up ur ass didn't cause so much damage. This may be different 4 Real Females?)

Not bad!! Excellent even! Congrats!

Great story, all the way through, "except" she never got to have her daughter Tori, fuck her and dominate her. Would have really been great to read and imagine.

Wow - what a fun and sexy read! It’s a total turn on to enjoy while my wife is also in the room - I’m hard as can be and leaking all over myself. The result is either a hot jo session or a hot fuck w my better half. Truly a win win! But shemales - I love the idea, but which town in Canada is stocked with so many shemales? An all-inclusive vacation there would be delightful!

So please add my thanks to the many you’ve received for sharing your fantasies with your readers. I’ve enjoyed a bunch of your stories, and on of your Q and A’s.

I also looked for the “racism” on page 1, and couldn’t find a hint. Perhaps there is a super mini infinitesimally tiny “micro-aggression 🙄” I missed. It happens.

een van de beste verhalen !!!

EXCELLENT art work. thank you

Great story with a wonderful plot. Easy to follow and I can't wait for a follow-up!!!!

A great story but too many references (links) to your previous successes make it sometime boring and it forces me to skip paragraphs.

Stories like this represents a sexualization of the school or classroom, and of the teacher. The implication is that the knowledge acquisition process constituted by the teaching learning process includes the acquisition of sexual experience whereas in reality, education sublimates or represses the sexual inclination.

Such a hot damn story! And easily the longest one I’ve EVER read on this site! So much shemale sex! You an definitely see that it’s one of your fantasies. I have a question was the face of Annabelle modeled on a particular porn start? I didn’t realize it until the story moved to Annabelle’s flat but it looks familiar to me. I’m thinking Lana Lopez but with red hair. Just my observation.

Racism on page one. Fucking gross "hierarchy of races" fascism embodied in this writer's fantasies.

This was so hot and you kept us going throughout the entire story and made it great not worrying it had a long length to it. So want to hear the next part!

Thanks for the story, it was terrific. I'm an old guy and would love to be used by all the people in your story. The wife is a a big prude and I've had to have sex with men and that was amazing. That's been going on for decades

Wish I could give this one 10 stars 💖💖

I like your style, the story moves along naturally and seemlesly with dialog that is believable. Thanks for sharing, your writing is inspirational.

Probably the hottest I have read.

Definitely a hot tale that ticks all my boxes please put us all out of our misery and wrote the serials. It's no wonder you appear on other authors favourite lists time and time again.

Where is part 2? I can't seem to find it, am I missing it somehow?

Has it been done yet? Will it be done? I would love to see more of this story, please?

Some of the hottest writing I have had the pleasure of reading!

i love the shemale submission, what a nice fantacy. definitely five stars.

That was wonderful. You do a great job writing about a lot of us 🚺 fantasies.

That was hot! Take me, Mistress Jasmine! Five Stars.

Excellent story! I love reading about submissive sluts and I love calling a cunt a cunt and a cock a cock! The incest factor was added very well. I would love to read any follow on stories that include Jasmine fucking her son, Tori fucking her mother, Tori fucking her brother. I also want to read about Tori and Jasmine fucking all of the cheerleaders.

Dear Jasmine, I think you are one of the best erotic writers alive! I am a disabled British pensioner veteran. The reason I mention this, is I no longer able to get a hard-on. I am on to many tablets for my medical situation. However, I am able to give myself physical relief reading your stories. They are just what my head doctor, ordered!

Loved it.

Am worn out from this marathon novel - don't stop! YOU have the need to share you're inner self with us!

it seem like your ready to give up writing

Wonderful, fabulously detailed illustrations-- both cunt and tit-fucking, and great cum-shot, plus a beautiful lengthy, story with all kinds of hot, dirty sex, including shit-hole . Fabulous stuff, Jazz. (still no golden showers "But one never knows, do one").

"Love you Madly", you are the best . . . always!

Jack Auff x o

It's so difficult to pick a favorite story of yours, since they are all so beautifully complete and so well written. This novella was a complete adventure into a beautiful new world for your Jasmine. Including your, her daughter added an even broader avenue to her personal sexual epiphany. Now with her new found love and her daughters both emotional and physical support, the sensual horizons seem almost limitless.

I'm looking forward to your future musing on this story line.

Bud

I’m off to find your other stories now xx

I loved this story and I really do hope that you will write a sequel. We have to know if you ever did get to fuck your daughter and also carry out the plans Annabelle had of seducing other women and fucking other men. Please don't stop here.

Wonderful story can't wait to read more of your stories.

That story was really smoking hot I could not get my nose out of it until it was done!!!!!

Now I gotta read the rest of your stories again......you really need to make a part 2 to this story though it has the potential to go all kinds of places

Really awesome writing though I’ve read your stories before and found them to be really interesting keep up the great work.

Definitely one of my favorites you have done so far, love it!

Have not read it in a while but enjoyed it would love to read a sequel with the big titted milf and her daughter in bondage being fucked by jasmine and her daughter then all four fucked by jasmine mistress

I hadn’t read it in awhile.

Such a great read. I played a couple times thought the story. Couldn’t help it.

So hot!!!

This is the first Illustrated story of Your's that I have read. You are an exceptionally talented writer, as while I read, I felt like I was there, watching. I could actually hear the moaning and smell the sex. It was exhilarating, to say the least. Rating this story on a 1 to 100 basis, I would give it a 125!

It was good but ended so soon . Plz give another part of with more hotnes

Oh my word that was amazing! So completely riveting, thrilling, exciting,.... none of those words seem good enough. I loved every single second of it. Now on to another story of yours.

So this is a preliminary comment. I haven't read this story yet. All I read was your notes on why you wrote it and I am already excited. I've read several of your stories and I am a huge fan. So I wanted to comment on this before I even read it, because I'm super excited because of how you talked about how personal this fantasy was for you. I'm 100% sure after I read it, a glowing review will be coming.... and probably cumming! Lol!

can´t wait to read the next part!

This the first story of yours, that has given freshness to my own sexual fantasies, which include me pretending to be a gorious busty shemale and fucking a woman such as your self. Ive jacked off over twelve times while I read this incredible story u have written, it's truely a hand crafted piece of art.

Anyone objects, fill their most with cock and their asshle and cunt too. They don't know how lucky they are to ave cunt ss well as ass, and mouth as well, so they can get fucked every way. You do, you goddamned fuking slut bitch. Good!

Definitely long. But definitely worth every minute spent reading it.

I must congratulate your illustrator. Absolutely extraordinary. I can understand why you had difficulty choosing .

All in all a brilliant work of art.

Well done mistress. well written, well illustrated, some of my fantasy too, to make LOVE to a women Transexual. May be one day... and if you come in Quebec let me know I have some nice surprise for you my little cum swallower :-)😉😙

Such a great vivid story did you ever write the 2nd part bondage training

Great story, I love the illustrations. I also liked the way other stories by Silkstockingslover were discussed in the story.

But in essence a bit too long and boring at times plus to many pictures of you getting your arse filled

I have never read such a great story the writing is superb brilliant illustrations can't wait to read part 2 thank you it really was a pleasure to read

I want to be used by you, and be your cum slut, bitch, submissive whore. And if you want I cook very well.

Very Good!

Very Horny pics and sucks and fucks!

And how you write. You have such a gift to be able to express yourself so well through the written word. I normally can’t focus long enough to read longer stories but I stayed focused on this one. Well done.

Fabulous, hot, great story, wonderful pics... But two thoughts - Who wears their glasses the entire time? And, ‘shemale,’ though frequent in erotica/porn, is a derogatory term. Just describing them as the transgender women they are would be fab. All that aside, your stories are just terrific!

You are a great writer I can not stop reading your writings. WOW is just not enough to say about this story I am lost for words.

this is the best story shemale ever!!

What an amazing story I'm a male and wish i was involved my wet dream to have a dominte shemale to use me as a slave my name is rocky 😍

I can't think of anything else to say.

That must be one of the hottest stories I've read on here and those wonderful illustrations just made it even better.

Amazing !

Rapier

It was your pen name that captured my eye and boy howdy am I glad I came to your page!! I think, judging by this story, I am going to enjoy your library VERY much! Thank you ma'am!!

An Epic romp. Wishing your fantasies were my reality. LOVE, LOVE, LOVE your storytelling! Thanks sweety

Omg....I was hard from the get go. Loved the illustrations as well. They helped tell the story. I love shemales. First story of yours that I have read but not the last.

Thanks

Another great story. I admire how your imagination just runs wild. Thank you again and just keep on writing.

images are masterful, if a masc word may be permitted, and the narrative is a relentless quest for every possible experience out there for a trans-fixed lesbian...

Thank you once again for an epic journey through your beautifully twisted mind. ❤️👍💥🙏

The quality of your stories within a story and the quality of your drawings makes this quite a stand out spectacular piece!

Anybody who gets past the she male characters, is in for a rare treat. I was hard the entire 14 pages as a straight guy. you put me over the edge!

That's it: Bravo!

I've always been a lurker, but I had to comment on this piece. I really liked it, mainly due to its length and its variety.

What's really nice is because of all the fantasies mentioned in the plot, it's easy to bookmark the page you're on, and come back later and there's something new and fresh. There's this comparison I keep making between it and a 90's WB series - the fantasies are like the "story of the week" part that got me off before bed, but the main plot parts were the bits that kept me cumming back for more and tie up at the end in a way all the fantasies lead into.

It's really hot.

It's really intriguing.

It's a damn good story as a whole & I can't wait for the inevitable scene where Annabell & Tori gang up on hungry Jasmine.

I don’t even have the words to properly thank you. Outstanding in every way. This is the best, ever. Thank You.

Another excellent story by you. The pictures of you with your perfect body and wonderful breast, just the right size for you and your smile and beautiful legs.

Have a great day and keep up the great work

You put your story in "Illustrated", but no illustrations. 1*

Intense ! Keep going. Mom & daughter need a 1 on 1 and get the head cheer leader.

Such a pleasurable story to read.

You describe so many of my longings and desires, loved this one, as I love to dominate and be submissive as well. I love cock and pussy and the darker the cock and darker the pussy is so sweet. thanks

Enjoyed this immensely, has me wanting to go out and find some sweet pussy to love on, thanks! Samantha

what a HOT HOT HOT story. thank you

Fantastic imagination, setting, reluctance, illustrations... Fantastic everything. Much deserved 6

It was definitely my pleasure to give you a five-star rating. Very well written.

To a Shemale will be great.

Though a man it would be a special pleasure to get thoroughly fucked by a She male.

Wish someday I will meet Anabelle.

loved it, one of your best

Best Shemale story ever written

loved it

be fun to watch you roleplay :)

This is by far the best piece I have read here.

Well done.

***** Five stars. The story was a masterpiece. All the intensity of the sensuous combination of a hot beautiful transvestite bitch with luscious titties and a long cock. The two kissed and sucked each other with complete abandonment. I was thrilled with the way the story went.

Thanks, Jasmine. Wonderful, erotic story!

Jasmine, love your user name. I love silk stockings also! Am a gentleman who grew up old school. I love see woman wearing dresses,skirts & blouses. Woman are the fairer sex, yet that doesn't mean that they are weak or frail. Times have changed, yet a woman who wears dresses, skirts & blouses with sexy lingerie i.e.: garter belts, stockings, sheer bras & panties, even crotchless panties, is a woman who knows who she is & what's she wants in life, Woman who wear jeans pants, sweats is trying to imulate a man & lose touch with herself & woman. Most men don't understand woman, thus don't know how to treat & react to woman. Thank you for sharing with your readers,fans & even online family🌹❤️💋

This was very good, the person who did the illustrations did a wonderful job. Are you thinking of writing a Continuation of this, hopefully picking up where this one ended?

Hey, Jasmine,. I noticed the female 'regular' characters all have pubic hair, but the she-males all seem to lack any trace of bush. Is that the fault of the computer rendering, or is it on purpose?

Annie Nonomous

However can someone tell me how old is the main character Jasmine? Like 40…?

Amazing mind and skillful imagination, Thank you alone is too small. You MUST do post move-in of Jasmine and Tori with Annabelle.

Alan

You have outdone yourself with this piece; there were times when my stomach clenched with emotion - as when Annabelle walked away with another woman - J's sense of disappointment was palpable; you truly conveyed both Jasmine's lust for Annabelle and the pent-up desire. The sex was amazing - you just capture the scenes so well. Illustrations are great. Thank you so much.

Great story, love the pics and your mind is a joy and wonder

Wow... just wow! This has to be one of your most amazing stories to date! I've been a huge fan for so long, and your stories are definitely a good companion on my late nights ;) hehe. I can identify with so many of your characters, and this story is just another example.

Hot women, unbelievably steamy sex and an amazing writer, all that a girl can ask for!

You've made yet another young woman very happy with your stories!

Love,

Aveline

The sexual scenarios are riveting and enjoyable to read....your prose is well done. More please.

actually illustrations, but just getting your attentions was worth it,, I loved it, even the length was so erotic. best on lit..