All Comments on 'A Short Four-Day Weekend'

At first it was fun but degradeted to pure lustful revenge.

Unfortunately it just petered out. I guess the author tired of the story.

Hot sex. Interesting horny characters. Might have been a good longer story.

There are two sphincters to get through at the anal outlet, the inner one very strong. There is no way, even in a fantasy that a human tongue, which is just muscle with only one attachment into soft tissue in the mouth, and has no hydraulic component to make it erect as does a penis, could penetrate another human anal ring. Maybe a well used cunt, but the unaroused anus, NO!! Needs to be kept within some form of reality, which the prior part of the story was, context and believability are crucial for a story in this category, as the other commentators have pointed out.