All Comments on 'A Sibling Love Story'

Yes, yes, yes.

Oh my "God" that was hot will definitely be reading again

My GOD - I came longer and harder reading this story than I ever have before - honestly it was the longest, hardest and most intense orgasm I've ever had. And I'm head-over-heels in love with this sibling couple. TREMENDOUS story!! SO well written - I litereally LIVED every word while reading it - thus the extreme intensity and length of my orgasm while reading it. OMG... This story left me not only fully satisfied, it left me totally and completely sexually contented. Wow!

Absolutely lovely. Perhaps the best bro/sis story here.

An excellent erotic romantic short story. I feel that the early pages are from a different story and have been unsuccessfully segwayed into a hot teen erotic drama, the love from early on was replaced by total lust.

Need a sequel

beautiful story, great writing! Thanks!

I'll go along with the sequel, other than that very good

One of your best, and that is saying something.

(4/13/2023) This was another five-star gem of a romance story with a perfect ending that will test our imaginations. But, of course, if you decide on a sequel; I wouldn’t mind.

It was perfect. A sequel could ruin it.

I throughly enjoyed this one more than all the others I've read by you. Both flirtatious and funny, sexy and sultry... and without the harsh verbal aspects of the previous stories I've read, more loving and compelling instead of just purely sexual. I'd love to see more like this in the future. 💕

Outstanding! This was a great, fun read. I appreciate it being a love story, and I enjoyed both characters. 5 stars, only because that's as high as I can go. Thank you for publishing it.

I loved this! So sweet and sensual yet naughty and carnal. Brilliant!

I loved this one, so much better than most of your other stuff...

So sweet, loving, so sensual, so beautifully written. Even though this was perfect by itself, I would still love to see a continuation to this. Thank you for such a beautiful story.

10/5

Possibly the best story I've ever read on Literotica. Sensual and loving, inevitable yet exciting. A minor masterpiece\! Switching b ack and forth in POV while keeping the characters separate and growing is tough to do, but you did it seamlessly. Better story and better writing technique than any of your other stories that I've read.

It is stories like this that keep me from voting 5 stars because I liked them. When a story is this good, there would be no way to give more than 5 stars so I normally stick to 4. You certainly deserve 5 here and wish I could offer more. Please continue to amaze me with your skills, and thank you for putting the time and effort into keeping others entertained.