All Comments on 'A Sibling Rivalry'

Brings back memories of wrestling with my teenage sister. No sex. Just grinding.

JUST KIDS FIGHTING, A WASTE OF TIME.

MY COMMENT ::: START OVER, TRY AGAIN.

3 out of 5 stars

there was not a chapter 2

I could anticipate where the story was going and when it got there, it was very good!

You are very good with teasing aspect of fore play.

I really enjoy reading your stories.

"They were both too far gone now to think about how naughty this was."

I love the way this builds. These are just two normal, though red blooded, kids horsing around, and their grappling leads to something naughtier than they probably would have imagined, although not so naughty that they will be irretrievably marked. They remain normal, healthy, believable kids, and they've gained a deeper, more caring sense of each other.

One of the best stories I've read so far I hope there is more to come! 5 stars!!!

amazing!! just fantastic!!

Great story I loved the way this story was told. well written

Well organized and a very good sense of the tension between the siblings. I especially like your final ending or I should say sentence - a great pun. Well thought out.

Nothing like titilization, hmmm?

I loved the way u developed the plot and rated it a 5, because of the punch line, just brilliant!

Bring back memories of me and my sister thanks

I loved how there wasn't actual sex. I think the whole "flirting" during wrestling was sexy as hell! :)

I loved this story. I hope you add to this. I want to see there relationship go further.

I found this an excellent start to a possible series. I like how it wasn't very explicit and kind of soft core. I seriously think you should consider continuing this story for at least a couple more chapters if not more.

I guess I wanted him to get his tongue into her naked pussy, and suck on her clit, to where they both realize that they really want to be lovers.

Still a good story and very nicely done.

Thanks for the read.

That was one of the best story's I've read in a while and you made me laugh! Great one babe <3

next day?

He he - I don't think that this matter will ever be settled, but I suspect they'll both have lot of fun "discussing" it.

That was great. Easily the best story I've read in a long time!