All Comments on 'A Sibling Survival Story Ch. 07'

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Turtle1952Turtle1952almost 6 years ago
Fantastic

Among the very best I have read in here. Very well done indeed. Look forward to some more of your fantasies.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
from Anonymous-E

A beautiful and amazing ending of Kait and Ben. Maybe their children will follow suit.

With your other stories, will there be a big family group of different families meeting and sharing their secrets to one another?

Justaguy3399Justaguy3399almost 6 years ago
Enjoy your break but please eventually make a sequel

I do hope you enjoy your break from writing but when you return please consider making a sequel involving their children because it could be a very interesting idea and I would love to see you write it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Thank you for the great story!

clearedtofuckclearedtofuckalmost 6 years ago
I agree...

with Justaguy3399.

andrepkandrepkalmost 6 years ago
I also agree...

with justaguy

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Perfect end to a perfect story....for now

I love where and how you took this and gave it the ending it deserved and we all hoped for. Sibling love culminated in children of love that took to same path their parents and grandparents did all those years ago - and with an open ending with high chance for a later conclusion makes for a perfect package!

Gave it and insta 5*! Now take your well deserved rest but do come back with more of such lovely and reader-including stories as this one, they make LE a better place.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

I agree with justaguy when u return could u make a spinoff involving there children

CrazyNewAdventurerCrazyNewAdventureralmost 6 years ago
About Judith's Colleague....

Ever gonna write a story of Linda Turnell and her son who also got infected with the virus back in The Best Cure is Love? Do they ever make love? And I love how most of your stories, illustrated or not, are connected. Oh... Wasn't Veronica's brother sick with something also? What happened between Veronica and him? :-) I will wait and hope you write about them too even if it's just a small side-story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Awsome

I realy love this series and if it was a real book series I would buy it. It's just so good. Are you a real book writer or us this just a hobby. You should think about this as a real carrer. I love love love love love love love live love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love this book

prop69prop69almost 6 years ago
A beautiful and loving ending.

How do handle Ben and Kaitlyn living together not married?

I hope you will start a story with the 3 kids.

Fan TASTIC writing

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Ben and Kaitlyn

These two are such a sexy pair. All through your stories, I kept reading for sexy Ben to have a bit of hair for his sexy muscular chest. He is such a wonderfully mature young man, and I thought to give him some sexy chest hair would have added to the excitement.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Awesome ! !!!!!

Thank you so much for all 7 story's !!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
lust

Sister is my lover. Nussin siskon pillua hotellihuoneessa.

kurinaxkurinaxalmost 6 years ago
Fantastic story and a fascinating concept

Firstly, the story was amazing. Great characters, great story, great sex. I was also very intrigued with the choose your own adventure style you had going. Five stars for every chapter, and you got yourself a new follower. I’d love to see a follow-up down the road focus on the twins and Lilly. Regardless, I eagerly look forward to what you have coming next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Outstanding!

These were amazing stories. I very much enjoyed every chapter. I too would love to see a sequal that picks up where this left off. I just gotta know what happens with the twins and their sister on their own island adventure.

dikupinyadikupinyaover 5 years ago
c'mon

one last time... please

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Holy fuck you can write. I have been glued to your stories. I sware I'm addicted to them.

LateStageInfernalismLateStageInfernalismover 5 years ago
Really and Enjoyable Story

I truly thought that I had left a comment about this story long ago, when I read it. It turns out that I had not. Well, shame on me. This was great fun, touching, and hot. It brought me a lot of enjoyment and I hope to read more from you soon!

JagnagJagnagover 5 years ago
Story to be proud off

Stunning piece of writing ...

Thankyou :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Great story beautiful keep them coming you r a great story writer

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
You did Great on This series

Enjoy Your Vacation from writing for a while ... I am wondering what You can do with the 3 Kids to Make a series .. Thank You

CormacMacArtCormacMacArtover 5 years ago
Awesome story!

Absolutely love the way you let the readers vote for how the story would wind. Great concept, first time I have seen that done on an erotica site. Loved the story, the sex scenes were wonderfully descriptive. The only thing missing was anal. :D

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
More, please?

Really enjoyed this story. Would love to read about the children. And maybe even the generations before on the island. Thanks for an entertaining tale!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Bad Parents

When Ben and Kait found out that thier parents put them in danger he should have taken Kait away and gave his parents the finger

horny2doithorny2doitalmost 5 years ago

A great story and certainly arousing and educational in what some brothers & sisters had to do to be happy. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Will we get to read their adventures?

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Perhaps a g Thesaurus would help your writing

I was really getting tired of everyone 'giggling' when expressing amusement. Couldn't someone chuckle, chortle, titter or snigger? You also focus a lot on the fluids splattering around during love-making. The constant repetition of 'incestuous fucking,' sex, or love also gets tiresome.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Kids with tails

Wow after three generations of incest the kids will have two heads and a tail if you don't stir the genetic soup pot once or twice. Good story though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Epilogue badly needed.

You need to do an Epilogue to this story. The older couple is saying "One last time?" As if they are in the twilight/ final years of their lives, there was never any mention of children on their part so maybe they should leave their estates to Ben and Kaitlin with the stipulation that they carry on their...Legacy?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Loved the story, just wish I could have read how it all turned out with the 3 of them.

woodwrkrdonwoodwrkrdonover 3 years ago
great story

I really enjoyed the story and would like to read about three young sibs challenges on the island. Keep up the good writing!

DocWordsDocWordsover 3 years ago

Wonderful story. Thank you.

Surya143Surya143almost 3 years ago

Damn got Ghooseboms

Great series

Diecast1Diecast1almost 3 years ago

I love the story, all 7 seven chapters. It's ending is very good. AAAAA+++++

WargamerWargameralmost 3 years ago

I loved the story

Scores 5/5

Cutty4637Cutty4637almost 3 years ago

Thoroughly enjoyed this story. Being a twin, it hits home.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Loved the series!!

I do have one comment to the author. I have read several of Your stories, two of them series.

I am not an English teacher, but I have written a great number of official reports. When I see grammatical

errors they stand out like a streaker in a cathedral at Sunday mass. Errors such as saying, "me and her,"

instead of she and I really detract from otherwise great stories.

clearedtofuckclearedtofuckover 2 years ago

I don't know how many times I have read this series. I know I have read it more times than any other story on Literotica. It is truly unique and fun.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Would love it, if you wrote the adventure of the above three children (brother, 2 sisters). And a story on whom will take over the teaching after the current teachers retire.

5 stars

Rancher46Rancher46over 2 years ago

What a great tale of generational brother and sister incestual love. Well done 5 stars

hellhale01hellhale01almost 2 years ago

Absolutely 5-stars all 7 parts. I loved every work

unclemerv77unclemerv77over 1 year ago

This is for all seven stories, I real[y enjoyed reading

Nato_Nato_over 1 year ago

Loved it. Super fun! Coach was a fun aspect

5/5

Nato_

Frankie1952Frankie195212 months ago

Sensational. Loved it and hope you keep writing such beautiful stories for a long time to come. So who will take over from the original couple and run the islands?

ScottishTexanScottishTexan9 months ago

On the plus side, FFM triads are my favorite thing. I was once married to a bi female and she shared her girlfriends with me whenever she was dating somebody. Combined with my fetish for sibling incest and I loved most of the ending.

The whole Mickey Finn kidnapping thing is too creepy and I hated it even though I knew that you were going to go there as soon as I read about Kaitlin being pregnant in the last chapter. 1/5

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

The idea of the MFF sibling triad is hot in theory, but in practice (for a story) it detracts a lot from the love aspect since the focus shifts too much. It's much easier to invest in a 2-person story, for me at least. I would still read their island story though should it ever pop up.

DuncanitaDuncanita4 months ago

Talking about multiple generations of incest in 1 family? That's a big thing...

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