All Comments on 'A Simple Life Ch. 01-10'

I liked this it's got a gentle pace but you can see the build up

I love this and can’t wait for more! I love the setting, the characters (except for the bullies), and I can see room for the characters to develop and grow. The length is appealing, as well, allowing the reader to sink into the story. Thank you for sharing your talents with us.

Please continue this.

lose the bullies...f@#$ that shit, it is not needed unless they are going to die horrible deaths later. I hope he speaks to Kayla soon.

We are off to a good start wish you had described Winona in more detail..

I can not believe you left us where you did..shame on you

Yes, intriguing and interesting. I'm looking forward to more!

Finally! You know how hard it is to find a nice futa fic on this site the doesn't have them dang near (or actually) raping the dude? Pretty hard unfortunately...

Anyway, really nice build up and world building! The main protags seem pretty cool, and it'll be nice to see Avery get some confidence and justice against his bro.

looking forward to the next chapters.. cant wait

Excellent character development and world-building! You've created really charming characters. Plus, I want to move to the island!

cant wait for the next chapters

Back again with another banger, great fuckin work, excited to see more

so far i love it cant wait how it turns out

Thank you for posting the next few chapters. I just had to come back and reread this beginning. You capture the internal monologue of the extreme introvert well. Almost all of us know moments of anxiety and uncertainty. If we’re fortunate enough to live in a supportive environment, we gain confidence and grow stronger. I’m anticipating Avery growing in ways he never thought possible. Thank you for sharing your talents with us.

I do have to agree, what a wonderful start this story. I am loving the characters and pacing. You really build the world and the people in it!

Oh my gosh. This is me. I love it!

I'd like to thank you from the bottom of my heart for this story. While reading i suddenly started to cry, cause the things that Avery goes through and the way you describe them ripped open a few very sensitive scars from my past for me. Vulnerabilty is something to be cherished and not exploited and that is beautifully mirrored in your work. The reminder that there are more people out there who think like that is heartwarming. I wish every bully out there would read this story to finally grasp, what it is they are doing to people.

These comments are just too much. :) Thank you everybody. I am so glad people are enjoying the story.

Wow, you're a great writer!

So good

Oh my gosh this story is beautiful. Hehe and wholesome shy femboy and passionate futa is by far the best trope. I honestly feel like you could put this on kindle, with some warnings about it being futa of course XD there is actually this kimd of content on kindle, but it usually will have a warning to stop negative reviews from normies