All Comments on 'A Sister and Her Family Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Great Characters Great Story

I love the follow up to the first chapter. Looking forward to the next one.. You are a very talented story teller. There is a good balance of sex and character development. My only suggestion is your use of the , is, sometimes, excessive,

Still five stars. Please keep up the great work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
awesome

Can't wait for the next chapter . Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Bring on the 3rd installment.

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