All Comments on 'A Sister's Love'

honestly for a first time story, really great read. I appreciate the thought and care but 8nto the actual story and would love to see a second chapter. Far to many stories that cut to "the action" without some kind of build up but this nails it perfectly, not too drawn out but not jumping directly to it either. Great work, would love to see what more you could do with your amazing talent.

This was bloody fantastic. Would love to see more

Great story, loved everything about it. The pacing was perfect.

Nice start. Looking forward to more.

Wow, just wow.

A bit more clarity at the start as to the characters genes would have helped, otherwise an original tale, a good first effort

Great first story. I liked the build up. Hoping for a part 2.

Very well done! Great plot, characters and build up. I would really suggest a spell check and re-read, just so technical issues don’t distract from the content, but a solid first chapter! *****

So is a sister trans? You talk about them being sisters but also about one having a hard cock.

Great story love the build up looking forward to the next chapter.

Agree with other comments need to explain the physical make up of the trans sister x

Good Story. I wouldn’t mind more of these sisters. Please keep them exclusive though,and I would love to see Jennie have Kim’s baby.

Wow! A beautiful, hot, well written tale of true love!

Is she a trans? or a hermaphrodite? If the second could become interesting. Let's have 2 nd chapter with more family descriptions. Pappasleaze!

Meh. Shoehorned LGBTQMNOPWTFBBQ nonsense.

I don't ever comment but after seeing all these gross homophobic and transphobic comments on a story that nobody forced them to read, I feel I have to.

Gosh, this story was so hot. I'm a trans lesbian myself and I'm so thankful for chaser-free stories that don't fetishize or misgender women like us. Thank you so much. This story is perfect. ^-^

That was so intimate and romantic! It's so nice to see well written trans women and LGBTQ+ positivity in erotica like this! Please write more, you are so skilled!

Please write more for them. I would to ream more about these 2 sisters

So cute and adorable these two are! I love all the positivity, it's really refreshing to read a story that isn't filled with slurs, or with the whole of Jennie's personality based on being trans. I feel actually represented in the porn I read now :3

Fucking adorable.

I would love to have either one of those sisters. I hope there's a sequel.

Please write more for this story!

that was hot as hell

i need more

This story

Wow. This story was so well written, after being an accountless reader for over 10 years, THIS is the story I decided to make an account for so I could comment and favourite. I really enjoyed the detailed descriptions of how this family interacts. Also Kim is such a brat lol

As a queer mixed Asian girl myself this really hit the spot for me.

Thank you and please write more :)

Amazing story, pleas write more! ❤️

Hot and cute and well written. Hope to read more similar stories from you in the future, or better yet a sequel.

Please write more! I wanna know what happens next!

God this was AMAZING! It's so sweet and cute and I love it! And the fact the main character is trans is awesome and as a trans girl myself I can say that the fact she keeps melting every time her sister calls her "good girl" is honestly so realistic.

God I hate that mom though, she's misogynistic, transphobic, and even racist... DX

What I wouldn't give to have more of this. There might have been more romance than you intended, but honestly it makes it so so so good.

So hot. I came buckets