All Comments on 'A Sister's Revenge Ch. 07'

I like the story so far. But not with getting Michael into gay sex with Robert.

I have a few issues with the story in this chapter. Cindy giving Michael the B.T. Cream which you say will reduce his male package. Cindy had called the doctor and set up an exam for him and said the doctor would have to do tests and decide if the changes could be reversed or should proceed further. Cindy should not be giving Michael anything to affect him until a decision is finally made about his future.

Roberta says that Michelle and Roberta are friends. But they only have known each other for less than a few hours. They can not be friends only knowing each other for only that long. Michael should not trust Robert. Robert said "I'll lock you up in my dungeon and never let you go. Never!" It is dangerous for Michael to be with Robert. And why doesn't Michael see that Roberta looks too much like the old man that molested him? Makeup, a wig and clothes should not hide him fully.

Michael thinks of himself more of a boy than a girl, even with him having breasts. While he thinks of Roberta as a woman. But Roberta has no breasts since he is a transvestite and has a bigger cock than Michael. If Michael finds out that Roberta is Robert, the old man that molested him and he hates him; Michael is going to feel used, lied to, was raped and taken advantage of by Robert and even Cindy.

Michael seems to have forgotten to use his safe word. He is being seduced and forced down a road that he will not be able to come back from. He needs to be protected from all of these people that are controlling him to make him into what they want.

RJ

You say your writing has gotten better. I could care less about the writing.

It's the forced sex and rape theme that really disgust me. Please stop with the story! It's really sad and pathetic!!!!!

People, read the story "The unruly son" it's pretty close to the same ideas, thoughts. and plot. IMO

Re: The Unruly Son comment - the stories may be similar, but this story, "A Sister's Revenge," first came out a year before "The Unruly Son" series was issued here - 2010 as opposed to 2011. But hey, I don't mind. I've read so many books and stories written along the same lines that it's hard not to write stories along a similar vein. After all, how many stories can people write here about a son and his mother without eventually coming up with the same plot and twists.What's important is the style and ability of the writer to weave a tale that holds the reader's attention. I try to do that, as I'm sure does the author of "The Unruly Son" series.

A lovely and truly delicious tale. Beautifully paced, lovingly naughty and so spunk inducing.. More please xx

I agree with Anonymous who posted on 1/22/2014. I also didn't need the man on boy gay sex. The story was better when Michael/Michelle had sex with Cindy. Nor do I like the BT Cream to shrink his genitals. They are a source of Michael/Michelle's pleasure and shouldn't be diminished. That is not say I didn't enjoy the story up to now. Michael/Michelle should be encouraged to enjoy his femininity, breast and nipple play and other feminine delights through being able to cum during those occasions, while maintaining his male organs. That way he will come to associate dressing up and having tits with sexual pleasure.

I loved this story are we going to get another chapter, soon I hope

I would have kept him/her with Cindy, Let Cindy take him and nature him and also to see him taking the hormones that Cindy had her doctor prescribe and the shots then maybe Surgery to finish it. Now I would like to know what happened to the mother and daughter what did Cindy have in store for them.

i would do anything to change to a girl, no holds bard the works all the way for me

Please! Continue this story, I'm in waiting 2 years.Thank you very much!

this whole story was fantastic. I wish I could find somebody like Cindy. She was amazing.

Was good until you let him/ her get raped .

Please continue this story

What taking so long

Your story here is fantastic, it has a great supply of vanilla and dark. I can relate to it more then you can even imagine. I honestly am hoping you continue the story or to the least give it a vengeful conclusion, I too was raped most of my life, I too was forced to be something I am not, only to find out differently after getting away from the abuse, I too left everything to get away from parental and sibling abuse of same sorts. I too am in transition, I however have yet to have my revenge, but have been planning for over nearly 25 years. please, don't listen to the haters, please let your creativity flourish and pour your heart and soul into your beautiful masterpiece. sure the rape parts are a tad dark and triggering, however....until you have been used like a sex and domestic slave most of your life, you wouldn't find the enjoyment of the fantasy along with the triggering of the anxieties surrounding it. so it is a good balance. fight back at the haters and follow your heart luv, letting anyone suffocate your creativity is in its own way raping you of your creativity just as much as sexual rape steals purity. be yourself, never allow anyone to make you feel inferior to them; think of your haters as the patriarchy and fight back with the entirety of your matriarchy erinamelia_pisces1989@live.com

The whole story is fantastic and I greatly would love to see the revenge on the mother and sister plus the outcome of what Cindy has planned for Michelle. I think it would is a great story that deserves a glorious continuation on with an epic ending.

of abuse to a boy who maybe had somewhat confused and/or undecided sexuality feelings. But is being forced down a path he doesn't really want by several unpleasant characters.

Cindy, You have Helped a beautiful young Boy Girl in to enjoying the years of a beautiful Shemale, learning the joy of being a Special Person that can live a special

way of life, Having people treasure her, and give her treasures and many loving

friends, wishing to be loved, nice6992

Ciao il continuo c’è è bello da leggere come va a finire

I do so hope you continue so that we can find out Cindy's Plan to get even with Michelle's mother and sister! also the doctors plans. Not sure how I will know if you continue, but I hope I do.

Great story cant wait for the next chapters wish i had a sister and mom who did this to me

Very enjoyable. Please continue

Where is chapter 8 and the rest.????

Liked the story, but not complete. You gave audience a 21 course meal and let out the last course. I mean when will we know what happens to the be mother and daughter??????--kilroy was here

Wonderful story up to this point, do try and complete it…

Good story with ONE MAJOR complaint......only half the story has been downloaded.....Where is the rest of it.

Why have you never finished this? Be nice if you make up your mind what characters name are, not consistent what you call them.

Amazing story!!!!! I really hope we get another chapter. This really deserves a conclusion. Wonderful 🤩🤩🤩🤩👍👍👍👍

Great story but you leave us hanging really need the next chapter of the next day PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!

To be continued but nearly 10 years on it seems unlikely. Such a shame I was really looking forward to the confrontation with Michael's original abusers. Great work though.