All Comments on 'A Sister's Visit'

by TryAnything

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dreaming_dailydreaming_dailyalmost 5 years ago
Erotic Massage Swingers story, my favorite

As a Dutch massage therapist I can approve of this story. I really loved the writing, the erotic atmosphere and the way Dutch swinging is described. Because it is true.

Interesting thing is that I will be in Lagos next year in the spring. So it was great to read about the beach and the wildlife/nightlife there. Looking forward.

I really enjoyed this story. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
beulahthebrit

Excellent start to a story, sadly I have neither a brother nor a sister, so haven't sucked or fucked them. Although I have had a pretty wide sexual appetite, so far it hasn't include a bi-sexual man as far as I know. What is needed now is another episode to continue their story of incest and swinging in Portugal.

prop69prop69almost 5 years ago
I read the first page and was interested.

Wish you told it was 10 pages

One star for not telling.

Way too hard long.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Wow! Ever so hot!

I've loved TryAnything's stories for a long time. This one doesn't disappoint at all. Incest is hot no matter what age. Bisex is always hot too. This story is crammed full of lots of incredibly hot sex! An interesting sequel would be to introduce their brother and sister into the incestuous swinging fold. Yum

johnb110johnb110almost 5 years ago
Too much of a good thing

Good story line but about 4-5 pages too long of an endless fuckfest. I wish I still had their energy & cumming abilities!

swampbuggyswampbuggyalmost 5 years ago
Please.....

Keep it going, would love to see more chapters of this amazing story!

ohmy181ohmy181almost 5 years ago
What an amazing read

I have to commend you on a great read. It was so easy to follow, and while I don't always enjoy such long stories, this one had me hooked. The storyline was fantastic, hot and so believable. I will definitely be reading more of your work.

Well done and thank you.

tobytimtobytimalmost 5 years ago
Loved it

Great story, bit over the top with that aged man multi orgasming, loved the part of getting fucked up the arse while fucking a woman, would love to experience that. Loved your story

LanceinBermudaLanceinBermudaalmost 5 years ago
Totally Fantastic

That is by far the best story I have ever read on this site!! It was unbelievably erotic, thought provoking, interesting, funny and extremely well written! I love the fact that “older” by age definitely doesn’t make sex a bad thing! Hell I may be a dirty old man ... but in my mind I’m 30 and when I’m with a hot sexy woman ... let the good times roll!!! Thanks for sharing this work of art!!! Cheers Lance

ChancesAreChancesArealmost 5 years ago
Glad you're still writing

I have to say some of your originals like Liveaboard Fun were some of the first great stories I ever read on Lit. At that time I never thought I'd write some of this stuff myself one day, but you really opened my eyes on how letting a story run it's own course to a certain extent can make for a wonderful (and unpredictable) ride. Nice work once again.

chuckminnchuckminnalmost 5 years ago
Great!!!!!!!

Fantastic story!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Fun, but...

Any male that multi-orgasmic in his 60's is more than a bit of a stretch. I might have had that kind of endurance in my 30's and 40's, but ... it tossed me right out of the story.

Irishbear03Irishbear03almost 5 years ago
Amazing!

Great Story. Would love to read more about these two in the future.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
It went off the rails for me

I really liked the story at the beginning but then it got to be a bit of a stretch. When you hit 60, the days of being multi-orgasmic are behind you. The author had the main character climax and back in the saddle in a short time. It just doesn't happen that way after 60. Also , I'm not into into gay sex, so two guys in a 69 is a turn-off for me.

2 out of 5.

munsonr1940munsonr1940over 4 years ago
Would Like More

Would like to see more stories about older individuals. Just because a person hits 40 doesn’t mean that sex slows down or stops. In fact in is usually more fulfilling. Really like brother and sister older sex.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Liked that the age group is older

Hot sex. Im average size. Wish something like this would happen to me at my age of 56. I’m happily married, sexually active but would love to swing once doing everything in this story.

TryAnythingTryAnythingover 4 years agoAuthor
Swinging

I didn't discover swinging until I was in my early 50s and married in Holland. Best thing that ever happened to me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Truely awesome!

I am 57 and have three older sisters. I have often dreamed of having sex with them.

Kpick96205Kpick96205about 4 years ago
Great work

You are a great writer. I love reading your stuff. I love the way you do with character development and once you set the storyboard you follow it building on the foundation. I couldn't stop reading until the finish. Keep up the great work and I look forward to reading more of your stuff. Again.... Great work and keep it up!!!!!!

Saula88Saula88almost 4 years ago
Great story, soooo erotic, 5stars

I love this story, particularly the erotic banter as the bro & sis warm up. My kind of story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
AWESOME story!

I very very much enjoy this story! He is living my fantasy! I've always wanted to have an ongoing sexual relationship with my sister and be a swinger :-) naturally me being bisexual I would share cock with her as well!

bad1_bbad1_babout 3 years ago

Outstanding. It was long but flowed well. Moved from page to page. Great story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

So sucking fucking hot. Cunt lapping sex maniac Lanc’s UK.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Terrific story with people who aren't hung up on the age thing. No restrictions on what anyone wants to do at each party so it's so much fun!

Did a foursome once with interesting results. My partner wasn't into anal and neither was she but we loved it! We talked the next few days and decided we'd like to move together to ass fuck all the time and each other partner had to admit it was a great idea. We stayed friends but didn't fuck again.

My old partner was terrified of my monster cock, having trouble with it's size in her pussy for weeks in the beginning, in her ass. This new couple we'd met had no issues and she could take my cock in her pussy and ass the first night! We were a nature fit!

TheItalianTheItalianover 2 years ago

He captures the swinging life as well as the basic philosophy of incest - its just another cock or pussy. The fact that you are related only plays in when you realize the sex is so readily available and there is no doubt that you both know it is only sex. Everyone I know that is involved in family sex is very well adjusted and happy. His ability to fully describe these situations especially the feelings and emotions of each party is outstanding. I hope he is enjoying his "research" as much as I assume he is! LOL

Gym52Gym52over 1 year ago

EXCELLENT!!!

An extremely interesting insight into the workings of the swinging mind set, swinging and incest appear to work well with each other, whilst adding a little spice to both.

Many people tend to forget that after a woman has passed through the menopause her enjoyment of intercourse increases, a the perceived threat of pregnancy decreases, leaving her mind far more receptive to sexual experimentation.

The multi-orgasmic males are lucky to be living in this authors mind, as far as I am aware very few 50/60+ males are fortunate enough to experience two orgasms in an evening, without a very long recuperating period. Further the risks of sexually transmitted diseases within communities of this nature are extremely high, especially as no prophylactic measures appear to be used in this fictional world, historically The Netherlands were the STD hotspot of the non-fictional world.

Congratulations on a masterpiece of erotic hetro/home sexual literature.

01Timber6701Timber67over 1 year ago

Sorry 1⭐️ story for me,,, I quit reading it when the first episode was the guy sucking the brother,,, you should put a disclaimer on the front of the story

Sorry again

bluesbobluesboabout 1 year ago

Good swinging story, and I know that it's fiction, but I just can't believe any man in his sixties can cum ten or twelve times during an orgy, then go home and start f*cking his sister again.

rbloch66rbloch6610 months ago

That is as entertaining. The only thing I question is a 60 yr old man’s ability to come that times in a couple of days. I enjoyed the way you presented the bi-male action. It put some things into perspective for me

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Needs a disclaimer for Gay Male stuff. The mature sibling angle was an interesting one but the boring over-the-top endless sex was just too much to believe.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

@Anonymous, there is a tag for male bisex. You should pay attention to the tag before commenting about disclaimers.

This is an amazing story and I never imagined I would be turned on by reading erotica about people in their sixties.

allnitedinerallnitediner8 months ago

Wow, how much do I love this story. I'm bi and well over sixty. I can safely say that, baring a few tantric masters I've met, coming that many times would be tough for a guy at any age. But WHO THE HELL CARES! I didn't read this story because I hoped for something completely believable. I wanted a hot brother/sister incest story. I got that in spades but this one backed up the dump truck, chock full of horny monkeys and blew me away. Sure there was a ton of sex and even more cum, barrels of it. What a ride, though. I only wish I could pull off something off like that before I go. Yeah, it would probably kill me but what a way to check out. Thanks T.A.

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