by SkipperJack
Great story...well written.. if you could make an edit there is a slight mis match when he swims over to eve early morning and the next thing they are drinking wine ??
Awaiting part 2, and maybe 3, 4, 5? Well written, sexy without going overboard in your descriptions.
Great job. Thanks.
Good story so far, but I absolutely hate when authors choose to make a chapter story, but don't call it a chapter 1. No warning, just a big "To be continued..."4 * lost a point for the bait and switch feeling I have now.