All Comments on 'A Skipper’s Mature Lust & Love'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Great story...well written.. if you could make an edit there is a slight mis match when he swims over to eve early morning and the next thing they are drinking wine ??

jtukeejtukeeabout 1 year ago

More More More and soon please

goodshoes2goodshoes2about 1 year ago

Awaiting part 2, and maybe 3, 4, 5? Well written, sexy without going overboard in your descriptions.

Great job. Thanks.

Bargyn1Bargyn1about 1 year ago

Really good start, please keep going.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

more , more.

OralinatorOralinatorabout 1 year ago

Very good. Can’t wait to see this storyline move forward

LeFrog08LeFrog08about 1 year ago

This is a great opening chapter. I’m eagerly awaiting the next one.

rnebularrnebularabout 1 year ago

Good story so far, but I absolutely hate when authors choose to make a chapter story, but don't call it a chapter 1. No warning, just a big "To be continued..."4 * lost a point for the bait and switch feeling I have now.

Crusader235Crusader235about 1 year ago

Good story so far. But I hate TBC in the middle of the love scene.b

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Well done!! Please continue.

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