All Comments on 'A Slave for the Day (with Friends)'
by eroticwritergirl
- 5 Comments
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoThis one is by a massive leap so much better than your first two stories. She wasn’t forced and could have stopped it at any time. It was a fantasy they both wanted.
Sex is soooo much better when everyone is clearly consenting. It’s kinda sad to have to say that but it’s still true.
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoI really liked the erotic acts they did, they were hot, but the reason i couldnt give 5 stars is that elles character didnt seem at all like a woman. 'ive secretly only every wanted to be subservient to men'. Geez, like any woman's ever thought that XD, kinda ruined it that she was some weird warped attempt at a woman who wants sex
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoDefinitely fresh and turned me on. The writing flowed well. It was an interesting story idea. I am pursuing a similar story idea where the man is dominated by women who are in complete control. I like how she was particularly attracted to the blue-eyed dude. I was curious about why she was interested in Blue Eyes and perhaps that could be developed for a stronger connection.
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoA Slave for the Day (with Frends) both needs and deserves Ch. 2.
If Elle were my girlfriend, I would make sure the guy with blue eyes becomes our friend and a regular guest at our place.
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