All Comments on 'A Slave in Imperial Rome Pt. 03'

Well written and enjoyable. Looking forward to the next and future parts.

Your words are so vivid. Scenes evolve in my imagination. I thank you for sharing your writing. I cannot wait for the next chapter.

Thank you for sharing. I really look forward to future chapters.

This relationship is so intriguing. And hot!

Love the direction you're taking the story. I keep checking for updates, hope you update more often!!

Great story, maybe now Marcus will become more assertive and possessive over his property. Rebekah will see his intention to breed her and resist or be reluctant but Marcus sees it as his natural right and takes what he wants, becoming more dominating and coercive as a result. There is no contraceptive methods allowed unless he says so and he refuses to use any except pulling out early or cumming in her ass and mouth when it is too early to make with child again.

What would be great is a spin off about his father and his own escapades. Suppose he purchased a new slave, 18 years old virgin and beautiful and uses her for sex much more aggressively and dominant than Marcus would and likewise breeds her with his wife's agreement. Also, what happens when Marcus must marry? Does he return from Judea in a few years with two slaves and a batch of children in tow and is presented with a young Roman patrician girl with lofty standards and expectations? Will have to straighten her out, humble her to make respect his slave women more?

This is turning into one of the best stories of its genre on the site. The introduction of Alonia into the story is a master stroke with so much inter-personal story potential. Again, many Bravos.