All Comments on 'A Slave's Journey Begins Ch. 09'

Your writing is good, but with all the pain and violence inflicted on the slaves' bodies, this story would be more appropriate in the BDSM category, especially considering the fact that they seem to want to be good slaves, which makes this story unfit for the nonconsent category. We often see the confusion between where to put a category - BDSM or nonconsent - but I think the choice should usually be obvious - if there is pain and/or willing slavery, it should go into BDSM.

Thanks for reading and for the feedback. I see where you're coming from, but I would argue that a story with sexual slavery at its heart - characters for whom consent is irrelevant - by its very nature belongs in this category. Just my take on it!

This is a very entertaining story no matter what section it is in. I'm waiting eagerly for the next chapter!!!

i totally agree with Magev...This story belongs under BDSM and not under non consensual since these girls want to be slaves and are eager to be good from beginning...Nobody are forced against their will as nonconsensual is....