All Comments on 'A Slice of Hell'

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HHCongerHHCongerover 10 years ago
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This is a very good story. Would like to read more about the twins.

TestSubject001TestSubject001over 10 years ago
5 stars

Thoroughly enjoyed it. I hope for more great stories from you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
"Slice of Hell"

"Slice of Hell" is a curious title for this story. Except in the beginning, where their life with their unpleasantly deranged mother was concluding, the girls' lives seem to be very good and getting better.

"Slice of Heaven" may have been a better title.

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