All Comments on 'A Slimy Shower'

by razor_richard

Sort by:
  • 6 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Hillarious Allusion to Masturbation

Too many people take literotica seriously as a source of fantasies. The goal really should be to poke fun at our human idiosyncrasies. Well done!

OblimoOblimoabout 6 years ago
Blue girl is blue

Man of marble, woman of Jell-O!

The ultimate pornographic metaphor.

Good to still see goo girls are still around even after all these years.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Compliments to the creator

This story is so perfect its worth edging five times to read it all..i hope you make more or if you have and i havnt checked well then oof and this story was godly

nitram5nitram5over 4 years ago
Good for me

Very good story for me. So you are planning to write a more monster girls stories in future, with some other species, like a holstaur, lamia, mermaid, arachne or alraune?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Amazing

I loved every fucking moment of this. This is one of my favorite short stories now. Please write more like this, maybe make it into a longer story or something. I loved the slime's dirty talk especially <3 Thank you!

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
userrazor_richard@razor_richard
Contacts and suggestions welcome. I often send my work out to others for feedback before publishing. More than one fan suggestion has become an independent story or a sequel.