by atkins
You got us teased for so long. I think i can eat a horse and now you are giving us such a tiny morsel. The word "slow" not only applys to the seduction of Jasmine, but also the progress of your writing.
Keep it up man, we are all watching yours.
Keep up the good work. Your submissions enhance the quality of this website.
Great build up and detail. Nothing like screwing a fat middle aged bird...
I hesitated, did I really want to read a story of a fat woman's seduction? After the first paragraph I knew that I did... your writing style had seduced me. I really enjoy it when a writer let's you inside of the minds of the characters it's almost like living the story yourself! One of my rare five star ratings.