All Comments on 'A Slow Seduction'

A wonderful sensual account of two people falling in love with all its ups and downs. And as in the story it does not matter if its MF, FF or even MM, its the feeling of being together.

absolutely .... one of the best all-time stories in the history of Literotica. Most of the stories make me horny. This one made me cry (in a good way) and just want to be loved. You made me want to know the characters in the story.

Everyone who visits this site knows virtually every story is going to end up with people enjoying each other sexually. The difference between great stories like this and the thousands of also-rans is the way this story developed. It gave us the full story of the seduction and allowed us all to enjoy how the clothes came off as well as how two very feminine lovers shared not just hot sex, but their feelings for each other. This is truly one of the best stories of all time.

I enjoyed the story very much...

Pussyrider i truly loved this story She swhould have poured a pitcher of ale over his head in front of all the other people in the pub I say this again Cheers on the great story.

Atlanta,Ga.

I enjoyed it very much...and I'm a guy! Very well written...Is this a true story I wonder????

It wasn't all about sex, you had great grammer and plot with only a few mistakes, and you wrote an awesome story!! Please write more!!!!

girl power once again, u gotta love it!!!

A wonderful love story!

The title of this really sums up this amazingly adorable love story!! XD Awesome writing, the characters were fantastic!! ^^

I love emotionally engaging love stories where I root for the main characters to find lasting happiness. Expertly written. Thank you!

Thanks so much for a beautiful story. xxx

Very good story,"nice" & slow start with an excellent finish,great stuff,read this twice so far,probably will read again when down so I have something to get me up!

Sure he showed just to be told off, but he was served properly. Ladylike

I got both warm and wet..... Loved it so much

Anneli

Found this gem once more after foolishly not book-marking it! Love the story, the characters and the setting. Great work!!

I really enjoyed it. Thank you so much for sharing it with us!

I am floating on air after finishing this incredibly touching story.🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹 a dozen roses to you along with the 5🌟's.

weary of reading this story. Such excellent storytelling of a brilliant story. The characters are people we might know, living places, and living lives not so different from our own. While I do enjoy a good erotic story with hot scenes, like this one has, I'm always seduced by hearing what a character is thinking and feeling, and you do it so verrrry well.

Please accept my deep gratitude for sharing your imagination and skills with us. I hope you will keep writing, as such gifts are truly rare.

...to GrrrreatImagination for reminding me of this Grrrreat story. I had read it some years ago and while remembering a little of the tale (mainly the pub scene at the end), I'd quite forgotten the title and author. I'm so pleased to have found it again. An added bonus is that your writing is so good. It's a pity you don't seem to write anything for Literotica now.

(Oh, and Tina did the right thing in turning down the Civil Service fast-stream chance. It's my experience that in both the CS and the police, fast-streamers turn out to be total wankers!)

A big thank you to Maonaigh for his comments about this story which lead me to read it. It is indeed a wonderful read. The pacing of the story and the slow build up between the eventual lovers was text book - A Slow Seduction. Umm, Pussyrider can we please have an encore. Thank you

what a fantastic story i loved the build up then the description of their lovemaking can't wait to read all of your other stories.

Oh dear. Someone's widdle sensibilities were offended by an amateur author who dared to put out a piece of work that the high and mighty critic disliked because it wasn't original enough. Maybe one-bombing every author who dares to put something out there that isn't New and Exciting to someone is the answer to the world's literary problems...or maybe just skipping what you don't like would do it.

as a male reading yuour story you had me from the get go i loved the story line you built me up , know ing it wasw going to happen and you just kept me reeadin fantasti story have to read more of your work

I loved reading this wonderful story again, pity I can't give it another five stars.

Fantastic story the bitchy husband got what he deserved and Tina got what she always wanted. Didn’t know she had that until Laurel came into her life. Damn, great story Mortal Kombat I hope.