All Comments on 'A Slut is Born'

...This will be excellent.

"...I was pushed between her legs and she moaned, fakely, and I could smell her pussy and taste it as she ground my lips against hers. She pulled me up and kissed me, deep tongue in my mouth and pinched my nipple hard enough to make me cry. She squatted over my face and pissed...."

I suspect that none of us realize the extent of your talent, Claire. However, having said that, I also feel we will find out soon.

Make allowances for the reader's impatience, WClaire; they may not understand how well [I feel] you can develop your characters & plot, dig into emotions, manipulate psychologically, 'move a plot along,' :-> and force us to believe with your uses of imagery and motivation.

I predict they will; it would work well to take your time.

'Nuff said. Exceptional.

Peace!

...but not hide...

~The shuddering orgasm found me in my maze~

Finding new ways to describe the indescribable. Hot story, hot slut in the making. Can't wait to see how see fares in her slavery...

But yes, don't rush it.

Claire, this is so fine. Great intro, perfect images, e.g., the flashes of light from the movie screen. Hope you continue this. best, Perdita

Daddy is very proud of you.