All Comments on 'A Small Mistake, Big trouble Ch. 12'

This story is very well written with a reasonably believable storyline and sympathetic characters. The saga has legs with several (3? 5? 10?) more chapters waiting if (when?) you put fingers to keyboard. Hope to read more soon.

Wondering why you did not introduced bondage, control and d/s into the story, even after teasing a lot about that idea, like amy's fascination with controlling, Kristi's personality has a tinge of submissiveness, Darlene's personatilty is mixture of craziness and full of fetish, plus Maggie could turn out to be some jealous woman (Villan in the story) this might have given new dimension to this story.... Hope you complete that....

I hope you come back and finish this story

Good story hope you keep it going

Mom, Amy and Darlene need to end up pregnant all together +++ the neighbor lady!!!