All Comments on 'A Soldier For All Seasons Ch. 14'

This story is deviating in multitudnal directions and frankly I'm getting lost? His duty had been to protect the princess yet now he's abandoning her to go to boot camp even though the entire plotline with Cora, the rogue judge and they as a group, still being hunted hasn't been closed? Let alone the Princesses up coming Marriage and megalomaniacal Mother?

And to add to the confusion Nate gives up protection of the Princess to an emotionally unstable Assassin they just met whose only interest till now was making sure she has suitable remuneration for her one act of alruism.

I liked the story initially but as it's progressed it's become increasingly haphazard and inane with random segues that don't make sense or performance issues from our Hero that don't go with being 40 year old Combat Veteran? 😭😭😭Just disappointing I hoped that this could of been a great story in the vein of Tefler hopefully the author makes a comeback in latter chapters? 🤔🤔🤔

Great series! Keep them coming.

I really do enjoy this series. Others may complain about plot holes but it's a fun story overall and like I said, I do enjoy it.

I check every couple of days to see if the next chapter is posted. Thanks for your stories.

Dig this story, 14chapters and the tanasasara(sp-lol) arc is getting its first hints of beginning, the judge side quest does allow him to be different without as much attention for a while.

Another GR8 chapter .

WTF.....this story was going along great and then just completely went off the rails. Am I missing something major which would explain why, Nate would leave Ana alone with a cybernetic assassin as her protection. Will her enhancements fade away now that she is no longer around him? When did he come so ambitious? Will her family take back complete control of her? What about the bug conspiracy?

So far I've seen inspirational hints of Starship Troopers, Dune, Star Wars, TSM (although, I haven't read it yet, however, others have eluded to it often), and now Judge Dredd. WOW! How creative of the author to draw from all those various sources (I presume)! Keep going for all it's worth!

Damn cant wait for the next part!!!

Excited for what’s next!

"The Council does not appreciate being wrong."

LMAO!

Great chapter!

So, is he heading off for Spectre or Justicar training?