All Comments on 'A Soldier For All Seasons Ch. 15'

Well, that was exciting. Even on deaths door he can still make a pass. Great story, well done.

MORE please!!!

Keeps getting better

I f---ing love this story.

LMAO, that was awesome!

Keep them coming.../A

Not sure why Nate got his ass kicked so badly. He's an EXPERIENCED soldier, I'm pretty sure he could have done better than just breaking Xavier's nose...

LET's GO !!!

Strange dreams, that perhaps have a deeper meaning. Then a super desperate fight. With all the blood, did he win?

Is he changing? ... and into what?

And a failed Sabotage plot. Great chapter 🔥

Great chapter. Really like the Gunny.

So first off just finish binge reading this series up to this point and I absolutely love this series and can not wait for the next chapter.

This series seems like a cross between

Mass Effect = How the judges are written.

The movie Upgrade=How Isabelle can take over Nate's body.

And a series on this site THREE SQUARE MEALS by Tefler= Magic body altering spooge.

The only complaints I have are

1.Nate should really rely/use Isabelles abilitys more.

2.Nate never should of gotten his ass handed to him as badly as he did in this chapter, at the bare minimum the other guy should of been in medbay just as fukked up as Nate. Reasons why 1. Nate has 22 years of military service, with more combat experience then probably every recruit and some of the instructors put together + an additional 22 years of bar fighting experience and..

2.He has Isabelle the fight should of been gg easy or at lest as I said the other guy should of been fukked up as well.

Small request I don't remember any description of the alian races would it be possible to get some, right now all I can imagine when reading is girl with cat or bunny ears,vampire girl ,four twig headed plant girl.

Keep up the good work can't wait for the next chapter 5 stars all the way.

Loved this chapter... but I was a little perplexed at how a 20 year combat veteran, decorated hero got his ass whipped by an immature smart ass punk trainee. I like the story a lot though. I think the writer is evolving as the story goes. He's writing this on the fly and submitting chapters as he finishes. The best thing here is constructive criticism as well as praise, and the story will mature. I think we could have a damn good writer here. Looking forward to what's coming!