by RobertWilsonWriting
Dude seriously this story has gone completely off the rails you started so well but now it's just a trainwreck. I can't believe that you don't think a 40 plus year old Captain would have half a brain in his head. Because Nate is acting like a fucking pimple faced teenager.
Afterall what's the first thing he does on the ship send Ana off by herself AGAIN with no personal protection like seriously didn't she nearly get kidnapped a chapter or so ago?
The richness of this story and characters just gets better and better. Well done.
Thank you for another chapter of the story, it’s a delight to read.
Half the comment section however is not. Enjoy the story, or write your own. Telling someone how to write are not constructive nor critizism - it’s just plain rude.
There's that guy below xhristianj bitching and moaning again . STFU . You don't even make sense . Go write your own book . This one is GR8 just as it is . Well done RWW .
"Hate to see you go..." Nate muttered.
He forgot to say, “but I love watching you leave.”