All Comments on 'A Soldier's Surrender Pt. 01'

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ItalianSunshineItalianSunshinealmost 6 years ago
yummy

oh my you are such a fabulous writer!!!!!!!

kylie74kylie74almost 6 years ago
Great Story

love how you write

can see me as Crystal you have a talent for putting people into feeling and seeing oneself in your story telling

Kylie

Submisky35Submisky35over 5 years ago
Nicely written story

I read Pt. 2 first and enjoyed it so much I had to read Pt. 1, It didn't disappoint. Very well written. Looking for Pt. 3 now????

Bob_AganoushBob_Aganoushover 5 years ago
Very good story

Very erotic, and very well written. You have a good sense of narrative and character development. I look forward to reading the next chapter.

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I live in Alaska. I am a Dominant. I enjoy writing erotic stories and poetry. Would love to read any and all feedback from anyone who reads my writings. Feel free to contact me!

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