by Koba
love how you write
can see me as Crystal you have a talent for putting people into feeling and seeing oneself in your story telling
Kylie
I read Pt. 2 first and enjoyed it so much I had to read Pt. 1, It didn't disappoint. Very well written. Looking for Pt. 3 now????
Very erotic, and very well written. You have a good sense of narrative and character development. I look forward to reading the next chapter.