All Comments on 'A Son Comes Good'

Another LAZY author who uses apostrophe's instead of quotation marks for dialog. Pure laziness.

BUT THE STORY HAS BEEN DONE BEFORE, HERE ON LITEROTICA .

Sentence structure want an issue with me.

Keep it up, and keep then coming.

Very unerotic - and surely that's the point in this cat? 3*

While I cannot express my views as a connoisseur of erotica, I must admit the story was enjoyable. What bothers me almost more than the possibility of the story being plagiarized (hard to have a true original story as there are but five root plots), is the cowardly manner of those who post the harsh critiques’ as anonymous. Yes, the stories are full of spelling and punctuation errors, but then this is a sight for amateurs. As a publisher of corporate literature I know how easy it is to make mistakes. The writers on here do not have the benefit of a professional proofreader, and yet we still find errors. Bottom line encourage, do not discourage

But I think I've read it before

Waiting for the second part, and hope they have a baby soon.

Mom's initial reaction to son jo is typical. Knowledgeable strict moms take corrective action to control son's behavior.

This seems some sort of re-write of "A Son's Pure Love". And it's no better.

Looking forward to the baby story next.

with the last commenter. Now that Will has shoved his fat young prick up his mother's mommy-hole and blown his young balls up where he was once a little baby, it's time for the boy to fuck a baby up his own mother's cunt. You could call it a really nice little souvenir of their hot incestuous fuck.

loved the seduction that occurred, her dressing for him, and their romance and hot sex-nicely written-good job

Enjoyed this ,so well written a very nice story

Just WOW, says it all! Thank you!

This is definitely one of the best story I've read since discovering Literotica a year, or so, ago. I liked is so much that I have reread it several times. Please continue writing these sexy mon/son stories.

I enjoyed every line. So well written and thought out.

This is one of the go-to stories in literotica.

Thank God, Finally, back to your usual best. I was starting to wonder after the last two stories I've read were very disappointing . Well done once again with this one.

Using a different title you could expand the story... This is pure copy paste...

I always find it hard to buy into mother-son incest; it just seems unrealistic for a mother to bed her son. A testosterone-poisoned adolescent male can fuck just about anything; even a board with a knot-hole. But I don't think, even in my horniest teenage years, I could possibly have fucked my mother. I read these stories from time to time just to remind myself how twisted they are. 1*

My mom had me when she was 16 (pregnant at 15). At 18 I graduated high school and was moving away for college 3 states from her. We started having sex that summer and when time for me to move to college, she moved with me. At 34 years old she looked hot. We now have 3 kids and are working on a 4th!

I am an older guy and I need a good story to help me reach climax. I live alone and thrive on these stories. This was the best!

There is also another one titled "A son's pure love"

I READ, A SON'S PURE LOVE....THIS WAS A WASTE OF TIME. --5 STARS

4 stars. I always take a star off for anal. I'm sick of anal in these stories, I'm not gay.

SUPER HOT story!!!!! 5 stars from here!

I enjoyed the story and rated it 5 stars. As an avid reader of mother/son incestuous love stories, I like logical plot development. I like character development that has breadth and depth. I somewhat understand the story from the son's point of view. From the mother's point of view, I think I understand her love and need for her son; however, without any source of income, what would happen when the husband found out? Fortunately, the husband had left his wife several years ago and was man enough to provide for her.