All Comments on 'A Son Really Sees His Mother'

Great start, I would like to see if you have more to the story? Thanks, this was very well written.

Hot story! You stopped too soon, though. You should have continued on and written about the actual performance.

Great story. Some grammatical issues and “head hopping” but not enough to lower the heat. 5*s

Possibly a play about the story of a play? Would love to see this on a stage!

This was a real story,of love and careing

between Mother and Son. A story that

could really work, and the sex has just

started. Very well done, PLEASE!!!!!!!!

give us more.

.THANKS.

USAF

If you do continue this, please make it work out for them.

Needs some meticulous editing -- e.g., the past tense of lead is led (not lead!), and the past tense of lie is lay (laid is past tense of the verb lay).

I found the male character wholly unbelievable - he just doesn't fit the stereotype that you built for him. He's so fuckin sensitive that he would make a better gay character, instead. How many times did we see him driven to tears??