by elliotknow
Not bad for your first story. Not sure why she is producing milk. Is she pregnant? Just have a baby? I gave it 5 stars because of your effort and description of a mother's love. If I may, in the future, you could build up the story so the reader can see their love and discoveries of each other. But, if you ant to keep your stories to one page, that's ok too. Thanks for your time and imagination.
Please continue and hope she gets pregnant. Big milk filled breasts...
Tell us more. Wishing every mommy would the same with all of us. More chapters ....please!!!!
No buildup
Why is she producing milk
What resulted in his mom doing this
1*
Good story. You captured his conflict his conflict nicely and like any guy, how his lust overcame his logic. Take your time when you write. there a couple of grammer mistakes but a good spell checker should catch those before posting.
Good job.
It might be just me but I find it a big turn off when a mother shows her pussy to her son and tells that was where he came from.
Anyone who has witnessed the birth of a child will know how sexless it is.
Not sexy at all I'm afraid however the rest was good.
What is the stupid talk about being "broken"? A very sick mother rapes her son! He goes to the police and she goes to jail for a long time or to a madhouse forever! So what's the problem!