All Comments on 'A Son's Fetish'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

My son, my son...my son, my son. Ugh we get it. Story sounded so unrealistic repeating that phrase over and over...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

I agree very unrealistic and repeating it with saying mom when the son spoke during the foot job

SomethingInTheWaySheMovesSomethingInTheWaySheMovesalmost 5 years ago
As mentioned: The dialog is lame and repetitive.

And the actual story is boring and banal.

lesliejoneslesliejonesalmost 5 years ago
Somewhat stilted

I did find the dialog a bit stilted, especially her continued use of "my son" which grated on me and apparently others. The idea was good and their mutual enjoyment was nice for a first time minus actual sexual congress. Do you plan a sequel?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Thankfully, I read the comments first....

Now moving on elsewhere.

Story from India? Or Sri Lanka?

Just guessing and English not first language?.🤔🙏🤔

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Terrible read

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