All Comments on 'A Son's Lust'

Excellent start, well written and holding out the promise of a lot more to come. I'm looking forward to it.

Epitomizes when a mother can no longer resist her son.

good start,let's see how you continue your story,

gave you 5 stars for the potential only.

Very erotic but short, hope you write Ch 2

5 big star

What a great story hoping there is more

Have her slap him and be offended...but slowly come around :) Well written so far. Just don't rush it please!

Good start, but where's the finish, leaving readers like that destroyed the whole story,,

I have just read two of your stories and enjoyed them, BUT you stopped way, way to soon.

Where is the rest of the story?

You get it started and then just let it die.

It's like you don't know how to keep it going.

(rjb49@bellsouth.net)

Where is the ending you just stopped you never ended the story what you had was good but the way you ended it made the whole story suck