All Comments on 'A Sordid Arrangement'

What sequal now plz you must have be inspired by the shadow rising

Could have been shortened to 5 pages. So much repetition so much repetition so much repetition. Good action, though.

A Sordid Arrangement is a blazing drama about passion and finding true love in the end. Great characters and and a swiftly moving plot line are highlights this excellent story.

Great fucking, though too long sometimes - we don't need several cowgirls in the row. Angry fucking from Erin and Kyle carrying her around fucking against walls are thr hottest.

Great story. Keep writing!

Love the pregnancy fetish, unprotected angle!

Glad everyone's been enjoying this story! Took me a while to finally finish a piece of erotica that I was happy to publish on Lit, and this one turned out pretty decent in the end.

There will be a sequel.

I'm fucking exhausted after reading this! My imagination is tired after all that heavy lifting! Holy shit. I feel dehydrated just thinking about the sheer volume of fluids involved. Incredible.

I want Erin and Kyle to fuck until the room literally tears apart. Both times they stop fucking for convenience, I believe they would fuck for days straight on if they could.

17 pages too many. Kyle is a jock asshole with a big dick who fucks everything on 2 legs. Peter is a fat nerd with a regular dick trying to survive a bad roommate, Erin is a frustrated airhead who’s getting off on the big dick roommate and cheating on boyfriend/fiancé without remorse…here we go in a paragraph.