All Comments on 'A Sordid Soirée'

Very nice and fun, please continue

"You weren't too bad," Elemiel allowed, "and I was spectacular."

You ever just love a character so much loool. a delightfully charged, fun, saucy story.

You have created an excellent read and I was honestly captivated. While I usually enjoy these type of tales, this one has managed to thrill me more than most. While the problem of one of the main characters name switching back and forth from Aspen to Aster and back multiple times was slightly annoying, the story itself was more creative than just a typical revenge story. The main character Elemiel is a wonderful mix of eroticism, adventurer, and comedian/smartass which is completely delightful. Your mix of comedy and action comes across pleasingly and not the least bit forced. I anxiously await your next installment of this tale. Thank you for rescuing my evening from intense boredom.

J.D.

"...to her distinct pleasure, Elemiel noted that the size of the pastry which sprang out at attention was much closer to an eclair than a ladyfinger."

Love it! :-)

Absolutely DELIGHTFUL, and I want to read ALL about the hostess/adventurer Elemiel!

Very good. Please continue with this one. Eagerly awaiting the next parts.

When is the next chapter going to be posted?

You may get me to join the Kindle crowd in order to read more of your stories. This was very well done and left me looking for more of the tale. I'm looking forward to following your writing.

I really would love to read more of this if you write it.

Hi friends!

First, thank you SO much for all these wonderful comments, reading them brightens up my day! Second, I've written part 2 of this story over here: https://www.literotica.com/s/date-night-142. Alas, because I am a silly elf and don't know how to use this website, I didn't name it correctly so it doesn't show up as such. Sorry about that. Third, Elemiel is an OC of OthalaM (who also does my cover art), and you can see pics of her at https://twitter.com/OthalamA.

Whew, that about covers it. Hope you all have a great day!

I would straight up read this as a novel holy shit this is good

5 stars

Not normally my style but I liked this one, and part two, for some reason. Strong female leads with agency are always a welcome relief.

Well this was entertaining!

I just got brought here from beginning the third in the series, and I suppose I'm binging them now.

Your writing style has a great sense of humor to it - it honestly feels very influenced by Terry Pratchett, had he decided to abandon all hope of famoly-friendliness.