All Comments on 'A Southern Wake Up'

... "you" is total rubbish because it destroys any possibility of believability even before it starts!!

There's no wonder you hid behind the cloak of anonymity - your comment lacked literacy or meaningful content. For a first story, this is a creditable effort at writing erotica - keep it up WetPussy.

I can't stand anonymous negative comments! Thank you for taking the trouble to write a first story...I enjoyed it, and found it very arousing...do some more....but I'm going to have a nap, now...!