All Comments on 'A Spanking Scene'

by RawHumor

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sweetcandynightsweetcandynightover 18 years ago
Filled up.

Spanking -- Hurts so good. There's also nothing like having both holes filled at the same time. Rawhumor writes his story almost knowing intimately what I like and what gets me hot and horny in a flash! Looks like I've got some more reading to do, but, ummm.. Not right now if I'm to get anything else done!!!

Blushing BottomBlushing Bottomover 18 years ago
Ahhhhhhhh

This is a man who truly knows how to arouse a woman. The enticing scenario of an erotic spanking always leaves me wet and ready to ask, "May I be next Sir?"

SaucyminxSaucyminxover 18 years ago
my oh my oh my

I think I may need a moment alone. . .

cicciolinaicrmcicciolinaicrmover 18 years ago
Anytime

you are welcome to spank me anytime.

SulkSulkover 18 years ago
A well paced scene..

And one you are welcome to re-enact with me at anytime ..

JustSkyeJustSkyeover 18 years ago
More please

I want to be that girl. Wow. Nicely done!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Hot, Hot, Hot

This story made the temperature in the room go up!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
spanks alot

Im wet already. I want more. Do you need someone to spank? Im willing anytime.*wink*

adventurous_1adventurous_1almost 18 years ago
spanks alot

Im wet already. I want more. Do you need someone to spank? Im willing anytime.*wink*

bobsgirlbobsgirlalmost 18 years ago
Well...

That certainly perked up my morning. This story's getting bookmarked, absolutely. Do you do birthdays?

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Guilty little pleasure

:)...You are a kind masta...hee hee!

Lorali82Lorali82over 17 years ago
Hot!

My #1 fantasy narrated oh so beautifully.

FyrNEyesFyrNEyesover 17 years ago
Spankin' hot

very enjoyable. very, very enjoyable.

CoupleFunCoupleFunover 17 years ago
Very nice!

From one who LOVES a good spanking with a bare hand over the lap, loved this... So glad I got the chance to enjoy.

DivineAngelDivineAngelabout 17 years ago
Sweet heat

Thank you for a great story, loving with the right amount of pleasure and pain :) will be reading up on your stories for sure.. keep em comming

BedtimeStories77BedtimeStories77about 17 years ago
Spank me!

I'll admit, I'm not usually a fan of the second person "you" stories, but You painted a vivid picture with this tale, Raw. I enjoyed it immensely.

oh_lovebird_raunchoh_lovebird_raunchabout 17 years ago
yummy!

You have a wonderful voice for narrative! :)

sortacurioussortacuriousalmost 17 years ago
Wow

This is perfect. Everything I enjoy, worded nicely and you made me crave it.

skittles_lmskittles_lmalmost 17 years ago
meow?

Please, Sir, may I have some more?

MsTexasMsTexasalmost 17 years ago
Wonderfully ...

Written and had me wishing it was my ass you were spanking.

Thank you for the pleasure

cobblestonefogcobblestonefogalmost 17 years ago
Mmm

Nice. Simple and hot. <b>Very</b> hot.

sexycaz22sexycaz22almost 17 years ago
Wow!

Mmmm....may I be the one in the story, Raw? *smiles*

Beautifully written, a big favourite fantasy of mine!

Thank you!

temptressstemptresssover 16 years ago
you make me wet

yes you do..

sooooooo wet

talent - you have talent - pure, raw, unadulterated talent...

your little whore likes it!!!

DirtyLilMindDirtyLilMindover 16 years ago
HOT

Very well written, your so detailed in your words, I love to read your writtings. Kudo's to you RH!

gypziedollgypziedollover 16 years ago
Oh My Goodness

Is there a line one can get into, for some of this????

XsnowbunnyXXsnowbunnyXalmost 15 years ago
Nice

RH makes me fully appreciate how good men are at multitasking :)

MirrokuMirrokuover 14 years ago
Mmmm.

Amazing story; you definitely know what women want to hear, and then it also seems you have a great knack for putting it into words on here too! Keep the stories coming :)

red_rosered_roseover 14 years ago
Love it!

THAT is what I want.

That combination of roughness and tenderness.

A handful of hair in one hand, strumming my clit with the other... except when you're leaving your mark on my ass with your hand

....I want this.

miss_bopeepmiss_bopeepover 14 years ago
Yes Please

God that was hot, yet sweet :-) My ultimate fantasy. Cold shower time for me...

SlapNTickle4MeSlapNTickle4Meover 12 years ago
Loved it

Enjoyed this story as it appears to be a more real life situation. Thanks for the visual :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Well, started to get good

But way too short. Need more detail. How are you feeling as you're spanking?

nflgirl81nflgirl81almost 11 years ago
Hot

I loved it, very hot. Looking forward to reading more.

deniebrowndeniebrownover 10 years ago
I felt it

I almost felt this as I was reading it.

you're very very good.

funluvinajfunluvinajover 10 years ago
Wow.

This is so close to my first real experience with spanking.... Mmmmmm

lisad83lisad83over 10 years ago
I'm wet now

I love to get spanked and I have been spanked similarly to this in the past. I really enjoyed the description of how you stimulated her to orgasm. I really enjoyed reading it.

Thank you for your writing,

Lisa

Simi1Simi1over 10 years ago
Mmmmm!

I loved it! The spanking, the ass play, calling her a slut! Mmm.... Delicious!! :D

kjgoldkjgoldover 10 years ago
Hot!

So very hot!

spankmegirl23spankmegirl23over 9 years ago
wow

I loved this story.Was so hot .wish I got spanked like that.

Apple_of_EdenApple_of_Edenabout 9 years ago
Makes me think....why not?

Good story, nice pace, and well.....well executed literally and figuratively! It makes me think...why not? Of course, my second thought was when? An erotic and fun story, thanks.

thelaughingcatthelaughingcatover 8 years ago
Another short, sharp blinder...

...very glad I clicked the link to your stories now.

Like a shot of neat whisky, both scenes I've read make my breathing hitch, my face flush and burns all the way down, all in the space of a moment. True talent :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Hot

It's fucking hot and made me so wet.

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