A great read; I just had to read to the end. It's so good to learn about the people, before the sex starts and I like the hesitation in both guys. I have a feeling that their shower is going to get pretty steamy!
Is English my first language? No. Am I particularly gifted at writing? Also no. Am I super experienced when it comes to sex? I sure wish I was. But do those things stop me from writing erotic stuff? Absolutely not. So live bravely and follow your dreams, reader.