All Comments on 'A Special Birthday Gift'

That's one lucky guy!!!

...as far as it went. It ended much too abruptly, though.

You had a good premise and a good build up, but the end result was lacking. The sex between Bobby his wife and his mother should have been much more graphic in detail. Quite frankly, the final scene was a disappointment. He should have been fucking his mom for example while she was eating his wife's pussy...You need to write a second part to try and validate this one.

Oh Please!! Let there be another chapter, this is sooo good!

I will then give it a rating.

His mom and his wife need to go down on each other in front of him, getting themselves ready for him to fuck both of the horny women.

Thanks for the read

In the end, much more time was spent on the encounter between the women than was spent on what was built up as the climactic event. Furthermore, it seems incongruous that the women's passions would escalate out of control during the planning stages but remain in check during the encounter itself.

I agree with RyeandGingerAyle. Great idea. Good writing too. Can’t wait for future installments.

I must agree with the last post, he should have had the pleasure of fucking his mom.

As already stated. This must move forward. He should atleast get to slide his cock between his mothers "DD's".

It needs another chapter, maybe two. Thank you for writing.

it ended too soon!

It was ok but not much to it!

Although written approximately 11 years ago, this is a perfect introduction to a wonderful series. The characters need to be developed in depth and detail. Emotional, psychological and physical relationships need to be developed in a logical matter. This is a really good story that needs to be developed. Please finish what you have started. 5 stars.