All Comments on 'A Special Business Trip Ch. 04'

very good reading..wish i was mike

can hardly wait for the next chapter!

I liked this series very much. Can't wait for the next chapter! Please continue that "rough" nasty style ;)

Good beginning. I will be waiting for the next chapters.

O MI GOD i wish i was mike sooo bad plz make new chapter

Im looking forward to the next chapters....please...!!!! I want to know what happens next...make it lot longer story...please!!!!!

luv your story i am sitting wanting to read more of this story

great storie wanting to read more mike is in a good place would sure love to be him if any one looking

Please, please continue!

you spelled Guten Tag wrong....

I was just wondering if there will be a continuation of this story

I've been really waited for this story to continue please can you finish it

More please it's been awhile.

Nice! Looking forward to part five!

^w^

Where is the fifth part,the story is amazing

I really liked the story. BUT as a german person your try to say something in german put me off...

Excellent story can't wait to read more of Mike's downfall into slavery. I wonder what else Ted and his friends will do to him.

Needs Serious Grammar Check……

The Good News is that I do Like the Story I really Do mainly because I Really haven’t read very many stories or at all about Forced Male Sex Slavery, and with that said I really want to get into the story I really do, but however that Sadly Brings me to the Negative Side and there are quit a few. The First is that as I have Mentioned The Grammar Whenever I Hit a Grammar Issue it Really Takes Me Out Of The Story, it really does Sadly. The Second thing is that In My Opinion you Probably could Combine the First Three Chapters in to one, but that part was fine I’m just saying if it where I would have done that, and the Third and Final thing is that

But Overall Lovely Story Loved the Descriptions