by The_Technician
T_T, anal is not to my taste butt you made it palatable. I hesitated if I wanted to read it , as I do for many of your stories,
However, The_Tech stories are always so cleverly crafted, so imaginative, such well defined characters and adults talking like adults. I just couldn't resist.
I do enjoy this creative work from your keyboard. Anal still is nothing I am willing to inflict or endure. This story gives me a reason to be a little less vanilla in my off the cuff judgement of new stories in genres I have a knee-jerk prejudice against.
A very Merry Christmas to you wordsmith, you have out O'Henry'd O'Henry.
First story of yours I have read. Wonderful idea for a Christmas present!
I think it was well written, short, simple and good. Good luck with the contest!
Warm, loving, maybe just slightly to Hallmark( being a guy ) but it is a Christmas story after all. Well written, I look forward to reading more of your work (this was the first story of yours I have read.) Five Stars. Good luck in the contest!
i was tempted to give you a 4* rating till the ending. that was so unexpected that i just smiled...5*
i was leaning toward giving you 4* till the ending.that really made the story...5*
He gave her lifelong love by turning her down in the bar. He would never cheat on her and it intensified hyer love for him. Fine story.
I love this! I had just read your Halloween entry for 2016 & was wandering through your other stories when I found this one. I loved it! Keep writing!
Reminds me of an O’Henry story without the sad twist at the end. Very uplifting.