All Comments on 'A Spot at a Wedding'

Loved it!! More please!!

could read some more

Ya, bring it on. Let’s hear some more, gym sex, exhibitionism, maybe a little lesbian play.

We need more of these type stories.

I liked the story but I think you might want to find an editor. There were some errors that made me almost back away. The story was good enough I stayed.

Loved it!!! Please continue!!a

Good story, missinga bit of depth for my taste. But please follow on.

Definitely continue, a good first effort. An editor or better proof reading would be a good idea. The numerous problems were a distraction, but not nearly enough to stop me from finishing reading the story.

More please ;)

This is deserving of another chapter

Was great! Definitely do another one