All Comments on 'A Spring Cleaning Ch. 01'

Ugh! Why oh why do dudes find chastity and endless frustration appealing?

I read the whole series then came back to chapter 1 to comment.

Great job! The story flowed nicely and possessed a variety of different scenarios so there was something for a variety of different tastes.

There was a sexual tension between them that you described well yet you also described the power differential well and described how her authority extends well outside the bedroom. Oh my god, I could not imagine how cold that shower would have been!!!!

My only criticism is that you stopped at Chapter 4. Hopefully that changes

Very fun to read, and quite arousing. I liked it that you went into great detail about the "Cleaning" of his um, member.

Great start!

Well done...hope to see more.

This is a fantastic story, I applaud you!

Please continue to write (YOU have a gift)!!!