All Comments on 'A Steamy Night at the Movies'

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gotranegotraneover 11 years ago
Great Start & First Effort!

Very good story, especially for a first effort! I would've given you a "5", but I save those for girls playing in pantyhose! Sorry, maybe next time. Either way, give us, at least, a sequel, or two, and, hopefully, a series. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.

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