by KachinaDoll
Very enjoyable, imaginative but believable story. Where did you get the idea for a story about a steam plough?. There is obviously a lot of hard work and research that has gone into writing this story and there was just the right amount of technical detail provided about how they did the job and it was very informative. This was well written like all your stories. I look forward to Part 2. Thank you 5*
Excellent part 1 if the second chapter is only half as good it will be read with pleasure
Super fun story! Liked the romance, liked the steam stuff. Off to read what else you have written.
I really loved the story, don't worry to much on steam engine information unless we have really steam geeks here as what you said about the ploughing pair was correct. Can't wait for dorset steam fair adventure
Absolutely superb tale - just come across your collection and immediately added you to my list of favourites
5*, of course. I almost don’t want there to be conflict or problems for this lovely couple in part 2! Thank you for creating these wonderful characters that have drawn me right in. They’re well-developed, likable, and believable.
The setting is a real joy to me as well. I’m a Yank, and I love trains and old gasoline tractors. I’ve never seen (met?) a steam traction engine, but you drew me right in, and I’m so glad to be able to experience them through your writing. Bring ‘em on with all the details and nuances you can find!
I’ve read all your stories here, and added you to my favorites, so thank you for writing, and thank you for sharing your work.
Great story, beautifully written. I loved your detail and use of surprising humor. Your gentle build and avoidance of gratuitous sex is greatly appreciated. Thank you. 5*
Great story, coming from Tunbridge wells I know all the places you have written about. Being a steam enthusiast it make the story even better with the fosters. Can’t wait for the next episode.
Great start! Looking forward to learning more about this couple in future episodes.
Cheers
SAGE
I first read your story some 7 months ago. It is just as good now as it was then. Thanks
Almost lost me with the long buildup and nary a mention of attraction, or even the tease of thinking about each other. Then, suddenly, they're fucking, in love, and getting married? Too abrupt. And too stupid! But, what the hell, it's a fantasy ain't it? The sex was so good that I still gave you full marks!