All Comments on 'A Stockholm Love Story Pt. 02'

Very yummy! I’m looking forward to more of this story! Thank you!

One of the pleasures of this chapter was all the references to Swedish culture and practices. It's these little touches that add verisimilitude to a piece of fiction. And you certainly made me chuckle in parts. I liked "...long time dead and Satan is a shitty landlord..." and the thought of Mark being so tight that he hated going for a crap because he disliked giving anything away. When I read that I thought that he'd be unpopular in Oz if he wouldn't shout his round! But then he changed his mind. And the vision of lying drunk in the dark and someone approaching with a luminous dildo would give anyone the heebie-jeebies (shades of Lear's 'The Dong with the Luminous Nose"). Another five star job, Shaima.

Of an excellent story. Please continue!

Another very good one. But can Moira work in Sweden post-Brexit? We're still waiting to see about Karin and Australia.

Shaima, you never disappoint

Shaima32, you really write exceedingly well. As others have pointed out, I loved the inclusion of all the landmarks and language translations.

There's just something special about a cute scottish lass speaking with that soft accent.

J

I enjoyed the story it was not too much nor too little. Thanks I will be sure to read more.

Its all about decisions ..... So walking down the pathway of our life the best decision is to enjoy and find happiness freedom and peace ...... So yes even its a cliche LOVE , true LOVE or better a soulmate is the best ever could happen

Shaima, your storys are allways full of live and life, so its great to read such poetry ...... Thank you for sharing your talent

Another great story.

These "simple" stories are starting to feel ... redundant. The characters are similar, the locations are different, and the endings are the same. The sex scenes are practically identical. Does every first time wannabe lesbian want a dildo? Seems unlikely to me.

Your longer works (especially the mystery and the egypt one) are fundamentally better stories than these shorties. Your writing does not "sing" in the short forms like it does in the longer more complex forms.

I have read several of your stories. There is something missing but it can't be that big of a deal because I keep going back for more. Your characters have a more realistic life than a lot of what I have read and the likes and dislikes seem to match up with mine. I will probably read all of your stories before I move on. I usually rate after I finish a story but with you I have just jumped to the next choice. They all would get the same rating from me. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️. Thanks for sharing

I really like your stories, Shaima. Keep writing!