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by ladywolf526

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

best story so far! good job!

Bayrunner2Bayrunner2over 9 years ago
Too many (I's)

A good story. Could have easily avoided all the personal nouns and it would have been more gripping. I could easily rewrite it and you could see how much more impact it could have had, but again, good work.

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