All Comments on 'A Story with Emotional Depth'

GREAT story...loved them, and cool mom...

Nice sample. Where is the rest of the story. Don't you think you should elaborate more. With just a sample you got me hooked. 5🌟's

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A nicely written story but I have a question. If Michelle locked her bedroom door, how was her mother able to walk in on them in the morning?

i gotta play softball..thats where its at haha. love your stories, so hot

I really loved your story. I think that the depth of the characters' feelings for one another came across very strongly. It was so much more satisfying than most of the 'Wham, bam, thank you mam' stories.

Well done!

i like the mum of the story.. hope i have one that open-minded too...

Really great story! It reminded me alot of my earlier days!! Very sweet and tender, and very erotic!